TOO SCARED

"Something I am scared of ever becoming ... a human being" has a better flow for me but all in all wonderful ... still a five star write love JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

Very enjoyable. Some parts seem to speak of my own life. A few details though: "I’m scared of my dreams become a reality" would be better, grammatically, as "I’m scared of my dreams becoming (a) reality" (the "a" is optional, I find it flows better without it) And for the last stanza, "I’mscared of freindship and love their companianship will require for me to become something I’m scared of ever become ………A human being." 3 typos: "I'm scared" "friendship", and "companionship". And, as Seren mentioned, "of ever becoming" would be preferable, in terms of grammar. But all in all, an excellent piece. Antoine