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Pieces

something did happen in some place in my heart,
felt deafened by a resounding love,
the thought of how am i going to bridge our gap...
leaves me hanging on over a question mark..

could i fetch her hand before the world falls down to my head?
when it's to unsafe for me to fall
she's owning much a boyish heart
will i get well through with this foolish goal?

i called her late last night to invite her for a date,
felt lucky when she said she'll be there by eight..
i'll be on my best way with roses all fresh,
surely she and i were a perfect mix..

it's already past ten so i walked around,
tried whisper your name then shout it loud!!
then i saw a teener girl..with my dream girlfriend!!!
nah! they're holding hands!!! she have her own girlfriend!!

i drove home with a broken heart,
felt paralyzed..crucified..electrified!!!
she's not the girl on a pink high heels..
maybe i should now cut my affection bills..

i made a short stop on my veranda..
i felt just a bit higher than a crazy panda!!
better find my bed and get a sweet sleep...
and assume that my dream girl was just a bad dream....
— whitescatter, Jun 17, 2010

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Region, Country: Laguna, PHL

Favorite Poets: William Shakespeare And the NeoPoet Family

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Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Just beautiful

I bow Sublime poem love JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
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whitescatter

16 years 1 month ago

tnx…“i’m the kind of

tnx... "i'm the kind of poet who likes to revolutionize poetry.trying to put the usual and unusual in the same mix.." i want to hear from you! read my works and drop your comments there..thanks.. Here... Jasfer Kerguelen "THE MOCKINGBIRD"

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