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Pieces

something did happen in some place in my heart,
felt deafened by a resounding love,
the thought of how am i going to bridge our gap...
leaves me hanging on over a question mark..

could i fetch her hand before the world falls down to my head?
when it's to unsafe for me to fall
she's owning much a boyish heart
will i get well through with this foolish goal?

i called her late last night to invite her for a date,
felt lucky when she said she'll be there by eight..
i'll be on my best way with roses all fresh,
surely she and i were a perfect mix..

it's already past ten so i walked around,
tried whisper your name then shout it loud!!
then i saw a teener girl..with my dream girlfriend!!!
nah! they're holding hands!!! she have her own girlfriend!!

i drove home with a broken heart,
felt paralyzed..crucified..electrified!!!
she's not the girl on a pink high heels..
maybe i should now cut my affection bills..

i made a short stop on my veranda..
i felt just a bit higher than a crazy panda!!
better find my bed and get a sweet sleep...
and assume that my dream girl was just a bad dream....
— whitescatter, Jun 17, 2010

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Region, Country: Laguna, PHL

Favorite Poets: William Shakespeare And the NeoPoet Family

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Seren

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Just beautiful

I bow Sublime poem love JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
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whitescatter

15 years 11 months ago

tnx…“i’m the kind of

tnx... "i'm the kind of poet who likes to revolutionize poetry.trying to put the usual and unusual in the same mix.." i want to hear from you! read my works and drop your comments there..thanks.. Here... Jasfer Kerguelen "THE MOCKINGBIRD"