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Jun 17, 2010
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something did happen in some place in my heart,
felt deafened by a resounding love,
the thought of how am i going to bridge our gap...
leaves me hanging on over a question mark..
could i fetch her hand before the world falls down to my head?
when it's to unsafe for me to fall
she's owning much a boyish heart
will i get well through with this foolish goal?
i called her late last night to invite her for a date,
felt lucky when she said she'll be there by eight..
i'll be on my best way with roses all fresh,
surely she and i were a perfect mix..
it's already past ten so i walked around,
tried whisper your name then shout it loud!!
then i saw a teener girl..with my dream girlfriend!!!
nah! they're holding hands!!! she have her own girlfriend!!
i drove home with a broken heart,
felt paralyzed..crucified..electrified!!!
she's not the girl on a pink high heels..
maybe i should now cut my affection bills..
i made a short stop on my veranda..
i felt just a bit higher than a crazy panda!!
better find my bed and get a sweet sleep...
and assume that my dream girl was just a bad dream....
felt deafened by a resounding love,
the thought of how am i going to bridge our gap...
leaves me hanging on over a question mark..
could i fetch her hand before the world falls down to my head?
when it's to unsafe for me to fall
she's owning much a boyish heart
will i get well through with this foolish goal?
i called her late last night to invite her for a date,
felt lucky when she said she'll be there by eight..
i'll be on my best way with roses all fresh,
surely she and i were a perfect mix..
it's already past ten so i walked around,
tried whisper your name then shout it loud!!
then i saw a teener girl..with my dream girlfriend!!!
nah! they're holding hands!!! she have her own girlfriend!!
i drove home with a broken heart,
felt paralyzed..crucified..electrified!!!
she's not the girl on a pink high heels..
maybe i should now cut my affection bills..
i made a short stop on my veranda..
i felt just a bit higher than a crazy panda!!
better find my bed and get a sweet sleep...
and assume that my dream girl was just a bad dream....
— whitescatter, Jun 17, 2010
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Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Just beautiful
whitescatter
15 years 11 months ago
tnx…“i’m the kind of