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Jun 17, 2010
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Night Sky
Gentle spring-like moon-less gloaming.
Balmy breeze caressing.
Briny eternal black ink canopy
embroidered with trembling luminous sequins.
I lay on indisputable firmness.
Mother earth, hard and comforting enfolds me -
and tips
so I am spreadeagled on the ceiling of eternity
staring into intense esoteric yawning.
I feel the negligible tininess of me
in the vast
of this enormous place
and I fall into forever.
Voluptuous motionless milky veils
reflecting iridescent silver and grey
emphasise the depth
of evermore.
One in the guise of a foot,
huge,
embedded with scintillating diamonds.
I imagine God is taking a stroll.
— judyanne, Jun 17, 2010
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shirley harrison
16 years 1 month ago
breath taking !
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
thank you shirley harrison
Kailashana
16 years 1 month ago
Mmmmmmmm. Delicious
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
thank you anna
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Judd
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
thanks jc
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Wonderful Judy
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
thanks rosina
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Judd
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
thanks so much jc
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
most of yours are hun lol
Nordic cloud
16 years 1 month ago
A star fell from the sky today, it was you judyanne
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
funny you just brought back a memory annanya
Nordic cloud
16 years 1 month ago
Catch a falling star judyanne
greeneyes
16 years 1 month ago
wonderful
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
thanks elizabeth
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