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Jun 16, 2010
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GRAY SHADOWS
While walking through the woods one day
surrounded by deep summer's green
I found myself quite far away
from any place I'd ever seen
I wasn't lost or turned around
(having compas and a map)
no need for searchers on the ground
thus avoiding"lost" mishap
On top a hill to my surprise
was an abandoned family plot
miles distant from most folks eyes
by even kin it was forgot
I paused to take a closer look
for chimney or abandoned church
near to this hill above a brook
amid thick stand of pine and birch
In seeing none I scratched my head
why put a graveyard here ?
who chose to put their newly dead
where nothing else was near
I noted then that huge oak trees
were growing at each corner
I knew the planter had to be
a long forgotten mourner
Squatting down I tried to see
by study of headstones
what family's plot that this might be
whose lonely, buried bones ?
But all the headstones were just rocks
half buried and unmarked
interspersed by random hollyhocks
giving no hint from where they harked
Upon a much,much closer look
when were they last alive?
same year of death they all partook
scratched deep was 1865
Rising then I understood
all six graves were brothers
buried here in somber wood
by grieving rebel Mother
The reason for no sign of home ?
destroyed by troops in blue
the reading of this long lost tome
now easy to construe
For just a moment I thought I heard
e'en now believe perhaps
in stillness breeze left undisturbed
a sad and distant "taps"
I turned to leave chill bumps behind
and seek a much more sunny spot
where sunshine's light would leave me blind
I hurried 'way at a slow trot
Yet still I seem to think about
these brothers late at night
and how they died with Rebel shout
fighting for what they thought was right
surrounded by deep summer's green
I found myself quite far away
from any place I'd ever seen
I wasn't lost or turned around
(having compas and a map)
no need for searchers on the ground
thus avoiding"lost" mishap
On top a hill to my surprise
was an abandoned family plot
miles distant from most folks eyes
by even kin it was forgot
I paused to take a closer look
for chimney or abandoned church
near to this hill above a brook
amid thick stand of pine and birch
In seeing none I scratched my head
why put a graveyard here ?
who chose to put their newly dead
where nothing else was near
I noted then that huge oak trees
were growing at each corner
I knew the planter had to be
a long forgotten mourner
Squatting down I tried to see
by study of headstones
what family's plot that this might be
whose lonely, buried bones ?
But all the headstones were just rocks
half buried and unmarked
interspersed by random hollyhocks
giving no hint from where they harked
Upon a much,much closer look
when were they last alive?
same year of death they all partook
scratched deep was 1865
Rising then I understood
all six graves were brothers
buried here in somber wood
by grieving rebel Mother
The reason for no sign of home ?
destroyed by troops in blue
the reading of this long lost tome
now easy to construe
For just a moment I thought I heard
e'en now believe perhaps
in stillness breeze left undisturbed
a sad and distant "taps"
I turned to leave chill bumps behind
and seek a much more sunny spot
where sunshine's light would leave me blind
I hurried 'way at a slow trot
Yet still I seem to think about
these brothers late at night
and how they died with Rebel shout
fighting for what they thought was right
— scribbler, Jun 16, 2010
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xena465
15 years 11 months ago
Brilliant Stan
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
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Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Stan
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15 years 11 months ago
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DawningDaytripper
15 years 11 months ago
Hi Scribbler, I did enjoy
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
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wolf
15 years 11 months ago
It kept my attention from
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
places
shirley harrison
15 years 11 months ago
shadows
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
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xena465
15 years 11 months ago
WoW Stan
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
shadows