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Jun 16, 2010
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GRAY SHADOWS
While walking through the woods one day
surrounded by deep summer's green
I found myself quite far away
from any place I'd ever seen
I wasn't lost or turned around
(having compas and a map)
no need for searchers on the ground
thus avoiding"lost" mishap
On top a hill to my surprise
was an abandoned family plot
miles distant from most folks eyes
by even kin it was forgot
I paused to take a closer look
for chimney or abandoned church
near to this hill above a brook
amid thick stand of pine and birch
In seeing none I scratched my head
why put a graveyard here ?
who chose to put their newly dead
where nothing else was near
I noted then that huge oak trees
were growing at each corner
I knew the planter had to be
a long forgotten mourner
Squatting down I tried to see
by study of headstones
what family's plot that this might be
whose lonely, buried bones ?
But all the headstones were just rocks
half buried and unmarked
interspersed by random hollyhocks
giving no hint from where they harked
Upon a much,much closer look
when were they last alive?
same year of death they all partook
scratched deep was 1865
Rising then I understood
all six graves were brothers
buried here in somber wood
by grieving rebel Mother
The reason for no sign of home ?
destroyed by troops in blue
the reading of this long lost tome
now easy to construe
For just a moment I thought I heard
e'en now believe perhaps
in stillness breeze left undisturbed
a sad and distant "taps"
I turned to leave chill bumps behind
and seek a much more sunny spot
where sunshine's light would leave me blind
I hurried 'way at a slow trot
Yet still I seem to think about
these brothers late at night
and how they died with Rebel shout
fighting for what they thought was right
surrounded by deep summer's green
I found myself quite far away
from any place I'd ever seen
I wasn't lost or turned around
(having compas and a map)
no need for searchers on the ground
thus avoiding"lost" mishap
On top a hill to my surprise
was an abandoned family plot
miles distant from most folks eyes
by even kin it was forgot
I paused to take a closer look
for chimney or abandoned church
near to this hill above a brook
amid thick stand of pine and birch
In seeing none I scratched my head
why put a graveyard here ?
who chose to put their newly dead
where nothing else was near
I noted then that huge oak trees
were growing at each corner
I knew the planter had to be
a long forgotten mourner
Squatting down I tried to see
by study of headstones
what family's plot that this might be
whose lonely, buried bones ?
But all the headstones were just rocks
half buried and unmarked
interspersed by random hollyhocks
giving no hint from where they harked
Upon a much,much closer look
when were they last alive?
same year of death they all partook
scratched deep was 1865
Rising then I understood
all six graves were brothers
buried here in somber wood
by grieving rebel Mother
The reason for no sign of home ?
destroyed by troops in blue
the reading of this long lost tome
now easy to construe
For just a moment I thought I heard
e'en now believe perhaps
in stillness breeze left undisturbed
a sad and distant "taps"
I turned to leave chill bumps behind
and seek a much more sunny spot
where sunshine's light would leave me blind
I hurried 'way at a slow trot
Yet still I seem to think about
these brothers late at night
and how they died with Rebel shout
fighting for what they thought was right
— scribbler, Jun 16, 2010
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xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Brilliant Stan
scribbler
16 years 1 month ago
shadows
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Stan
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DawningDaytripper
16 years 1 month ago
Hi Scribbler, I did enjoy
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16 years 1 month ago
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wolf
16 years 1 month ago
It kept my attention from
scribbler
16 years 1 month ago
places
shirley harrison
16 years 1 month ago
shadows
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shadows
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
WoW Stan
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16 years 1 month ago
shadows
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