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Dance Of The Butterfly
Soft and gentle as the morning rain
I see you sitting on the edge of the bed
Looking into the vanity
Pulling the rollers
From your hair
You are more beautiful
Than the heavens above
I try not to even breathe wrong
I don’t want to disturb you
And have you stop
For even a second
You have the skin from your youth
The glow of our children
In your eyes
And alabaster hands
That guide a brush
Through the fine red lace
Of your hair
You were born
With the face of a angel
But your real beauty
Is in the softness
Of your compassion
The gentleness of your touch
You are a butterfly
That has landed on my heart
And changed me forever
I am weak
In the glow of your tenderness
And draw strength
In my desire to take care of you
I will lie here
As still and quiet as I can
Until the end of time
And watch the morning dance
Of my butterfly
Critiques
Kailashana
16 years 1 month ago
Ohhhhhhhh to be loved like
hobo
16 years 1 month ago
Thank you
raskin
16 years 1 month ago
What a wonderful expression
hobo
16 years 1 month ago
Thank you
magics02
16 years 1 month ago
Hobo
hobo
16 years 1 month ago
Such kind words
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Hobo
hobo
16 years 1 month ago
Thank you
lou
16 years 1 month ago
Love like that
shirley harrison
16 years 1 month ago
Beautiful Hobo!
greeneyes
16 years 1 month ago
Absolutely Beautiful!
hobo
16 years 1 month ago
The more I read this
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Randy
magics02
16 years 1 month ago
I had to read it again
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