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Dance Of The Butterfly
Soft and gentle as the morning rain
I see you sitting on the edge of the bed
Looking into the vanity
Pulling the rollers
From your hair
You are more beautiful
Than the heavens above
I try not to even breathe wrong
I don’t want to disturb you
And have you stop
For even a second
You have the skin from your youth
The glow of our children
In your eyes
And alabaster hands
That guide a brush
Through the fine red lace
Of your hair
You were born
With the face of a angel
But your real beauty
Is in the softness
Of your compassion
The gentleness of your touch
You are a butterfly
That has landed on my heart
And changed me forever
I am weak
In the glow of your tenderness
And draw strength
In my desire to take care of you
I will lie here
As still and quiet as I can
Until the end of time
And watch the morning dance
Of my butterfly
Critiques
Kailashana
15 years 11 months ago
Ohhhhhhhh to be loved like
hobo
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you
raskin
15 years 11 months ago
What a wonderful expression
hobo
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you
magics02
15 years 11 months ago
Hobo
hobo
15 years 11 months ago
Such kind words
xena465
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Hobo
hobo
15 years 11 months ago
Thank you
lou
15 years 11 months ago
Love like that
shirley harrison
15 years 11 months ago
Beautiful Hobo!
greeneyes
15 years 11 months ago
Absolutely Beautiful!
hobo
15 years 11 months ago
The more I read this
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Randy
magics02
15 years 11 months ago
I had to read it again