purposeful words

    A giggling mistress
           underlies
the ardent anagrammarian

      words are fore play

— brittle light, Jun 16, 2010

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Region, Country: upstate New York USA, USA

Critiques

brittle light

15 years 11 months ago

hello annie

thanks ... just playing with words. sometimes somthing 'deep' happens! anyway, sorry about the delay in the reply. My name is Al, And I am very glad to meet you. I'm sure we'll cross each others path again. only now, (after 2 weeks being a member) am I feeling comfortable enough to respond, comment, and maybe offer a critique occasionally. Still feel like 'the new guy' also, thanks very much for your previous comments.. ( I never did thank you for them). I'll try to be more "polite" in the future. AL

Beauregard

15 years 11 months ago

Giggling :)

Ardent-- thank you for teaching me a new word today! A very short piece, but so evocative (or should I say provocative?) and full of subtext; I'll have to come back to this one a few times to fully grasp its meaning. Kelsey

raskin

15 years 11 months ago

Smart, funny, playful, I

Smart, funny, playful, I like it. Raskin