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brittle light
brittle light
Jun 16, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

purposeful words

     A giggling mistress
            underlies
 the ardent anagrammarian

       words are fore play
— brittle light, Jun 16, 2010

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Region, Country: upstate New York USA, USA

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brittle light

brittle light

16 years 1 month ago

hello annie

thanks ... just playing with words. sometimes somthing 'deep' happens! anyway, sorry about the delay in the reply. My name is Al, And I am very glad to meet you. I'm sure we'll cross each others path again. only now, (after 2 weeks being a member) am I feeling comfortable enough to respond, comment, and maybe offer a critique occasionally. Still feel like 'the new guy' also, thanks very much for your previous comments.. ( I never did thank you for them). I'll try to be more "polite" in the future. AL
Beauregard

Beauregard

16 years 1 month ago

Giggling :)

Ardent-- thank you for teaching me a new word today! A very short piece, but so evocative (or should I say provocative?) and full of subtext; I'll have to come back to this one a few times to fully grasp its meaning. Kelsey

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