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there is time

there is time
and fields of weakened flowers fold
before our eyes
bestowing their permanence on memories lost
and you are long in my eyes
the touch of your feet giving life to the sacrificial wood of stairs
and the travel of my fingers remembers the world of your skin
its smooths and silences;
to the speech of your eyes I am wordless
a sail lost to a thousand horizons
and the heron remains still above its reflection
as our love is searching
in the long neck of night
to swallow an elusive fish
love




— Orphani, Jun 15, 2010

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Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

15 years 11 months ago

Oh I wilt Barry O!

Ann of Norway I wilt with admiration at your poem here, its scents and colours fading memories, their papery wrinkled petals raise again, pressed and caressed in books of vellum, claimed forever sensed in your touch, your heart, your silken pillow mellows memories of fire, what love to which we all would wish to aspire. Lovely lovely Barry. Love from Ann who holds you a dear brother.
O

Orphani

15 years 11 months ago

A curtain undulates to a

A curtain undulates to a light breeze, and a leaf flutters. From a blinding sun comes the illusion of sight: light and shadow are the masks of love. From the heart comes the true vision of the poets eyes my sister dear. Love B.
Geezer

Geezer

15 years 11 months ago

Your memory...

serves you well. Bringing the images to life, via the tactile senses. And the similes are so vivid! You have brought the feel of your love for her to us all. ~ Gee
loved

loved

15 years 11 months ago

THERE IS

.....BEAUTY NOT ONLY IN THOUGHTS BUT WORDS ASTOUNDING LOVE IT IN ALL ITS REALITY THAT IS LOVE AND GLAD YOU SHARE IT