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Jun 15, 2010
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Pedal Point Prayer
Under a rising sun of subtlety
may I lead a life
of contemplative harmony
in an aria of melodious rhapsody.
And with the mystery of voice,
its timbre dulcet and mellow,
be honest in lyrics,
truthful in tone,
unadulterated in cadence,
mellifluously delineating sharps and flats,
projecting acoustic emotion
that infuses the soul
with its perfection in pitch.
And like the idyll of a nightingale
touch others with the octave of my sound.
— judyanne, Jun 15, 2010
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xena465
16 years 1 month ago
I love it
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
thanks rosina
shirley harrison
16 years 1 month ago
wow !
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
thank you very muchly shirley
mand
16 years 1 month ago
Wonderfully descriptive
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
hi mand - lovely to see you
Restlesslittlesoul
16 years 1 month ago
I love it! Beautiful and
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
thanks ana
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Judd
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
hoped you'd relate to the musical references jc
lou
16 years 1 month ago
Judy
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
thanks lou
R.M.Shanmugam
16 years 1 month ago
Under a rising sun of
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
so kind shan
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