Seren

Jun 15, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Supernova in Forever

I asked
that you Press me,
between the pages of your love
and as you enfolded me
in the volume
of your life

I asked,
that you cherish me
holding me
in the crook of your heart
just a moment

you did,
and now I burn

A supernova
forever

— Seren, Jun 15, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Beyond the Black Stump..Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda, P.K.Page, W.H.Auden, to many and various to include them all ...

Critiques

Candlewitch

15 years 12 months ago

Dear Jayne

Wonderful imagery here. I like the part paralleling pressing a rose between the pages of a book. very beautifully done. Love, Cat

Seren

15 years 12 months ago

thanks for the comment I am just writing a few lighter poems I was getting too dark thanks for the comment I am really happy you liked it love and big hugs JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

CyberSpace

15 years 12 months ago

beautiful I am speechless

beautiful I am speechless this time love Snake xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox

Seren

15 years 12 months ago

so you should be lol love

so you should be lol love Jayknee x x x x x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

hobo

15 years 12 months ago

wow

wow this is pretty hot my friend, pretty hot

Seren

15 years 12 months ago

Dear Randy

Hot as a supernova ? lol thanks for the comment hun really appreciate the read and the pretties love and hugs JayCee x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

judyanne

15 years 12 months ago

oi oi oi

go aussie go beautiful jc love and hugs and a nomination judd xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html

Seren

15 years 12 months ago

OI OI OI thanks heaps Judd I

OI OI OI thanks heaps Judd I am so happy you liked it .. I am off to bed this bird is tired being working on stuff for the site and the chat committee all night I am whacked love and hugs JayCee aussie aussie aussie ;) ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

shirley harrison

15 years 12 months ago

oh my goodness

5 stars are not enough ladybird, you are truly an inpiring poetess! i love your idea of the book its truly beautiful!in the best possible way i am jealous of your wonderful mind! shirley harrison

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Shirley

Thanks so much for the comment I just write them where they come from only serendipity knows lol she is after all my muse :) big smile huni if you latest poem is anything to go by I LOVE where you are headed love and big hugs JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

raj

15 years 12 months ago

Dear JayCee

you seem to be in a very inspired and creative spell...so much said in so few words...and the word Supernova fits so perfectly in this super write..it brought on an instant Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh... it's no wonder you have grabbed both hot spots here in spotlight as well as evolution simultaneously...deservedly so... hugz... raj (sublime_ocean).

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Raj

I forgot for a while where I put my voice ... and where it was lol I am slowly getting back to where I was a few months ago, being sick has taken its toll but I am getting better each day thanks for the wonderful comment made a crappy day brighter love and big hugs JayCee x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

mand

15 years 12 months ago

yeh! another stunner!

yeh! another stunner! Thanks for sharing Love to you Mand xxxx

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Mand

thank you so much for the reads I am so happy you like them i have been really busy the last two days and I havent had much time to read I hope to rectify that tonight ... will see you there smile love and hugs JayCee x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

scribbler

15 years 12 months ago

supernova

got here late. all has been said by others.short but powerful.....scribbler

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Stan

thanks so much for the comment big smile better late than never my friend will be round later tonight and I will get time to read lol fingers crossed love and hugs JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

xena465

15 years 11 months ago

Super

Blew me up this one JayCee, ha, ha...Fabulous. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

pmsl

Ya funny buggar ... thanks for the fabulous darlin love and big hugs JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

Geezer

15 years 11 months ago

Pressed...

between the pages of the book that is your heart. Your Snake is one lucky guy. But, I think he knows that already. You did indeed, lighten things up. Love and hugs, ~ Gee

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Gee

I hope he knows lol and if he doesnt hes thick lol love ya baby lol jj ;) yeah I am lightening up a little I am trying not to write so dark but sometimes its hard and I know you understand that lol love to you hun higgliest hugs JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

lou

15 years 11 months ago

JayCee

Wonderful stuff much love lou xx

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Lou

Thank you so very much huni ... love and hugs JayCee x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

Patricia_legacy

15 years 11 months ago

Hi JayCee

I loved this poem. Beautifully styled and beautifully written. Takes my breath away. You are so talented and this poem is awesome. Pat

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Dearest Pat

You are so kind and generous thank you for that lovely comment I appreciate it ... this poem was inspired by love ... hes a good man that saved my ass ;) love to you hugs JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

Beauregard

15 years 11 months ago

I press flowers

and sew and garden and act all around like a little old grandmother (no offence to the grandmothers out there, I love you all!) so your imagery got a sweet little smile out of me :) To be held in the crook of my mother's heart I have to get past a lot of bosom first. It's soft though, so it's nice! HEHEE Kelsey "In criticism I will be bold, and as sternly, absolutely just with friend and foe. From this purpose nothing shall turn me." -Edgar Allen Poe

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Kelsey

I can sew cross stitch cook garden milk a cow plow a field lol I am a country girl and my grandma's both taught me well lol nothing wrong with being handy hun :) you make your mum laugh like mad dont you Kels lol and its nice you still hug her I am lucky my daughters always been a hugger lol those hugs save me ;) ... love and hugs JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

Beauregard

15 years 11 months ago

OOPS

Double post!

Moloko D. Mahuma

15 years 11 months ago

Splendid

Wow! Very beautiful and well written. You have your way with words. "Keep up the passion" Regard, Moloko

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Moloko

Thank you so much for the beautiful comment made me smile and made my night thank you love and hugs JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

Bonitaj

15 years 11 months ago

O.M.G. Jay Cee

and I don't do blasphemy - but this one really touched me!! grazie mille for your daily dose of inspiration! boni

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Boni

Ello you ~!~! nice to see a pic of you ... I sent you an email the other day hope you got it alright my weekend has been insane so if I have missed your reply I will get to it in the next few hours got a couple of hundred emails to catch up on lol, thanks for the lovely comment glad you liked it and I hope the inspiration faery visited ;) lol love and hugs JayCee x x (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)

Natania

15 years 11 months ago

great

This is really beautiful. I don't quite get the book references (pages, volume, etc) compared to a supernova but it works somehow.

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Natania

Dont think we have met before so hello ~! :) welcome to Neopoet the reference to books and volumes and supernova is a private one, but for me there is a relevance ... I ahve three more poems that go with this one and hopefully when they are all published this one will make more sense thanks for the read and the comment kind regards Jayne-Chloe (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)

magics02

15 years 11 months ago

Lovely as your heart

This part I really like the best Jayne C holding me in the crook of your heart wow and what a heart you got and what poetry you do indeed write gal. You are a supernova gift to all here. Love at ya Aussie gal Mona xoxox

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Mona

Your a sweetheart thanks for the lovely comment ... I am so sorry for the late replies lol I have been flat out all weekend and I only just got some time to myself this afternoon have to go to the shops but will be back in an hour to comment and read for a little while I need tooooooo reeead lol and relax talk to you later hun hope your having a good weekend love and big hugs JayCee x x x (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)