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Jun 15, 2010
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Supernova in Forever
I asked
that you Press me,
between the pages of your love
and as you enfolded me
in the volume
of your life
I asked,
that you cherish me
holding me
in the crook of your heart
just a moment
you did,
and now I burn
A supernova
forever
— Seren, Jun 15, 2010
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Candlewitch
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Dear Jayne
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Dear Cat
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beautiful I am speechless
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so you should be lol love
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oi oi oi
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yeh! another stunner!
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Splendid
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O.M.G. Jay Cee
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Lovely as your heart
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Dear Mona
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