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Jun 15, 2010
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invisible
dear high school kids,
i was the girl who you passed in the halls.
i was the girl who always sat near walls.
i kept to myself and never spoke.
none of you talked to me or cared if i had choked.
none of you cared about me.
and no one was brave enough to see.
none of you knew the real me.
you never wanted anything to do with me.
the day before this note was wrote a boy who had friends who cared.
looked at me while i was crying and scared.
his eyes were deep blue and to die for.
i didn't think he even knew who i was.
every time we passed each other in the hallway.
i looked at me with out turning away.
i feel bad for him about what i did.
i wrote this note to show all the kids
that ignoring a person is wrong.
that boy is alone now.
and i am dead but i will see him someday.
no matter what all the kids say.
love,
invisible <3
i was the girl who you passed in the halls.
i was the girl who always sat near walls.
i kept to myself and never spoke.
none of you talked to me or cared if i had choked.
none of you cared about me.
and no one was brave enough to see.
none of you knew the real me.
you never wanted anything to do with me.
the day before this note was wrote a boy who had friends who cared.
looked at me while i was crying and scared.
his eyes were deep blue and to die for.
i didn't think he even knew who i was.
every time we passed each other in the hallway.
i looked at me with out turning away.
i feel bad for him about what i did.
i wrote this note to show all the kids
that ignoring a person is wrong.
that boy is alone now.
and i am dead but i will see him someday.
no matter what all the kids say.
love,
invisible <3
— thedifference5457, Jun 15, 2010
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