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Jun 15, 2010
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The great escape
Tired of the prevailing,
veiling smog
the dense brown sauce
the featureless fog
for transparency and light
and a dance in the sun
and feather-weight songs
spun on nimbly tongues
part your gloomy curtains
(with still shadowed hands)
then walk, straight and certain,
to your own "promised land"
— brittle light, Jun 15, 2010
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