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MUDDLED MUSAC

 "MUDDLED MUSAC" Ann 14th June 2010.

 

 

In muddled musac goes the history of music 

mans his varied fads ands fancies 

playing bands of sound that roam the slurs 

among our sighs and dreams there out in space 

a part of us 

it blends with light and pungent vapours 

singes swings a dance 

we cannot see and yet we wonder 

how it cannot BE. 

 

You see it's uttered muttered said 

and travels through the air 

it's resonance is pleasant from the one 

but then it mingles with the soup of ages 

and I fear becomes a deafening cacophony 

of elephant-like harmony 

his trumpet in the jungle 

sounding through the mangled trees 

half drowning oh ah me ah me 

where can it all be gone 

when I sing my little song 

it goes to thee 

the man I love is sitting next to me in fantasy 

his countenance is smiling 

despite the many words 

sometimes so totally absurd 

but no I'm not a nerd 

it all comes from my heart 

that instigates my art 

and flourishes with love 

inside of me.

 

 
— Nordic cloud, Jun 15, 2010

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Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

Favorite Poets: Too daunting this.

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xena465

xena465

15 years 12 months ago

Music to my ears

I love the descriptions and flow. It sang along artistically…Superb Ann Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell
judyanne

judyanne

15 years 11 months ago

interesting thoughts annanya

'it’s resonance is pleasant from the one but then it mingles with the soup of ages and I fear becomes a deafening cacophony' all the sounds made over all the ages would make an unholy cacaphony eh? love and hugs your way annanya from judyanne to you xx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
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shirley harrison

15 years 11 months ago

well i'm just spinning

wonderful Ann much love..... shirley harrison
Seren

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Dearest Ann

I am going to try and send you a short email before bed I ahve been busy with neo chores tonight so my friends have gone wanting sorry ... but i did make it to your poem ... I ahve a couple of suggestions I have to read one of Kels in the morning and I will make my suggestions for this one only a couple of small things beautiful poem but you would know i would love this one lol love and hugs JayCee x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

15 years 11 months ago

Oh lets dance together all of you?

Ann of Norway You dance my heart into your words, the music you make, I can hear even though music isn't definable, you are and you are here with me, how lovely. Come join the dance the loud cacophony of words and send them out, to baffle all the gods and daemons, the other nerds in space we've not yet met, may understand them yet. Ann in playful mood. With love of course, of course of course!
Seren

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

I am going to slip slide my

I am going to slip slide my bum into bed lol and get some much needed sleep Ann sorry I didnt get here today but I will be here tomorrow guaranteed love and big hugs JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
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shirley harrison

15 years 11 months ago

i'm dancing Ann!

your such a spirited soul! shirley harrison