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MUDDLED MUSAC
In muddled musac goes the history of music
mans his varied fads ands fancies
playing bands of sound that roam the slurs
among our sighs and dreams there out in space
a part of us
it blends with light and pungent vapours
singes swings a dance
we cannot see and yet we wonder
how it cannot BE.
You see it's uttered muttered said
and travels through the air
it's resonance is pleasant from the one
but then it mingles with the soup of ages
and I fear becomes a deafening cacophony
of elephant-like harmony
his trumpet in the jungle
sounding through the mangled trees
half drowning oh ah me ah me
where can it all be gone
when I sing my little song
it goes to thee
the man I love is sitting next to me in fantasy
his countenance is smiling
despite the many words
sometimes so totally absurd
but no I'm not a nerd
it all comes from my heart
that instigates my art
and flourishes with love
inside of me.
Critiques
xena465
15 years 12 months ago
Music to my ears
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
interesting thoughts annanya
shirley harrison
15 years 11 months ago
well i'm just spinning
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Dearest Ann
Nordic cloud
15 years 11 months ago
Oh lets dance together all of you?
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
I am going to slip slide my
shirley harrison
15 years 11 months ago
i'm dancing Ann!