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That day at Hanging Rock

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Like nimble goats, the four of us climbed high
over peaked edges of granite and time.
No crags nor height deterred us, though I did
have a moment of unbound panic when
I happened at an edge...to glance downward.
The years of living singularly had
not prepared me for this assault of life,
this glorious messiness of children
not my own...this want for adventure's rush.
We came without a picnic lunch, a map.
Climbing, climbing, up we went to the sky
line that hovered in the distance as a
shimmering light...eye of the holy grail-
my heart pounding, shaking, trying to throw
off the rusted years...knowing through being,
that sometimes rust cushions the nettle's sting.
Yet no fear had I for scrapes and bruises
gathered on the rocks of journey's teaching-
for I had you with me, and I carried
the gentle that you gave me on the rough.
The gentle of the smile within the heart,
the gentle in the mend of broken heart.
We reached the summit in a tangle of
limbs and laughter...our cries carried over
the rock-face to take the heady dive down
to the earth to where this life had begun-
underneath the shadow of Hanging Rock
forever in a day in love with you.

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— pleiades, Jun 15, 2010

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Esker

Esker

15 years 11 months ago

climbing

"rust cushions the nettles sting" favourite line hiking is a small passion for me brought back some good memories Esker~
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pleiades

15 years 11 months ago

hanging Rock is a

hanging Rock is a terrific climb made all the better by the view when you reach the top at a certain time of day, the light is beyond adequate description simply breathtaking p
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scribbler

15 years 11 months ago

hanging rock

liked it a lot.Rock climbing as a metaphor for life!........scribbler
judyanne

judyanne

15 years 11 months ago

very beautiful write P

'Yet no fear had I for scrapes and bruises gathered on the rocks of journey’s teaching- for I had you with me,' - exquisite just on a lighter side - glad you didn't take a picnic with you - look what happened to those who did :) love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
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pleiades

15 years 11 months ago

big hardy har hars from

big hardy har hars from me over your picnic comment... i didn't even think of that when i wrote that line thanks for your lovely comments cheers p
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Restlesslittlesoul

15 years 11 months ago

How touching! And so

How touching! And so beautifully written! "Climbing, climbing, up we went to the sky line that hovered in the distance as a shimmering light…" Love this bit in particular. http://restlesslittlesoul.webs.com
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pleiades

15 years 11 months ago

thank you restlessit was

thank you restless it was such a lovely day, and the rock is a great climb well worth the effort when you get to the top cheers p