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Jun 14, 2010
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THE LITTLE THINGS
I take my shoes off where we dine
which I think is just plain fine
its better than the times you"hide"
news paper's sports and classified
Sometimes I don't fill ice trays up
and leave enough for just one cup
but your gas guage, it stays on "E"
necessitates fill up by me
And while we're talking 'bout the car
the radios too loud by far
although you say my trucks a mess
its clean enough for me, I guess
Just 'cause I leave poem notes about
is no reason for you to shout
at least when we do sleep at night
for covers you don't have to fight
I drive too fast, I drive too slow
but we still get there ,don't you know
who got the last summons or ticket?
for seat belt violation, click it!
The times I fix us grub to eat
I don't leave kitchen sparkling neat
you frown at me and think its lame
when e'er I watch a football game
We sit and look each other over
each thinking life is far from clover
but then you smile and I just melt
forgetting all the vex I felt
which I think is just plain fine
its better than the times you"hide"
news paper's sports and classified
Sometimes I don't fill ice trays up
and leave enough for just one cup
but your gas guage, it stays on "E"
necessitates fill up by me
And while we're talking 'bout the car
the radios too loud by far
although you say my trucks a mess
its clean enough for me, I guess
Just 'cause I leave poem notes about
is no reason for you to shout
at least when we do sleep at night
for covers you don't have to fight
I drive too fast, I drive too slow
but we still get there ,don't you know
who got the last summons or ticket?
for seat belt violation, click it!
The times I fix us grub to eat
I don't leave kitchen sparkling neat
you frown at me and think its lame
when e'er I watch a football game
We sit and look each other over
each thinking life is far from clover
but then you smile and I just melt
forgetting all the vex I felt
— scribbler, Jun 14, 2010
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mand
15 years 11 months ago
I think this is a down to
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Stan This is beautiful
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15 years 11 months ago
Love is in the air
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15 years 11 months ago
little thungs
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
the tribulations and the joys of a relationship
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Candlewitch
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Scribbler
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15 years 11 months ago
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shirley harrison
15 years 11 months ago
no true love is wine and roses
scribbler
15 years 11 months ago
wine and roses