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Lightning Strike

 

Slivered forked lightning striking

from clear azure skies,

literally a bolt from the blue,

should’ve destroyed.

 

Instead I retreated to a place I remembered

aglow with the lights of a million fairies,

where all colours reflect a golden hue,

and hid.

 

Under scintillating red suns of blurred battered emotion,

sheltered in the lea of my illusory harbour,

I watched from afar

faltering fish fly over choppy black oceans

and bewildered birds swim through grave clouds of grey,

while the heaving heavens trembled

and the mortal earth wept.

 

And until the undistorted sordid snakes of reality

ripped me from my sanctuary

into a blazing agony of hovering truth,

I cowered unconscious in a drifting bed of denial.

 


— judyanne, Jun 14, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Western Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Favourite poets? So many, so varied. I like particular songs, not necessarily the singer... and the same goes for poetry. I can honestly say though, that Alfred Noyes' The Highwayman was what inspired my love of poetry - my mother began reading it to me when I was still a baby, and it became my favourite bedtime story

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Critiques

hobo

hobo

15 years 12 months ago

very nice

very nice write my friend I really liked the lines And until the undistorted sordid snakes of reality ripped me from my sanctuary into a blazing agony of hovering truth, I cowered unconscious in a drifting bed of denial. nice read
judyanne

judyanne

15 years 11 months ago

thanks randy

i appreciate your reading and commenting love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
SH

shirley harrison

15 years 12 months ago

wow

The great Storm, wonderful and very powerful much love shirley harrison
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

15 years 12 months ago

Dear Judy

I'm afraid I can't pick out favorite lines as they all speak loudly. I am with Shirley, this is powerful work! Love, Cat
judyanne

judyanne

15 years 11 months ago

hi cat

thanks for the support love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
mand

mand

15 years 11 months ago

Full of wonderful imagery,

Full of wonderful imagery, sometimes a bad memory can strike out of the blue, you help so many people by explaining how you feel Judy. Love to you Mand xxxx
judyanne

judyanne

15 years 11 months ago

thanks mand

for visiting and for your supportive comments love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
xena465

xena465

15 years 11 months ago

Fabulous Judy

I love these lines... Instead I retreated to a place I remembered aglow with the lights of a million fairies... Made me think of the stars as little winged people darting across the universe...a lovely image. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell
judyanne

judyanne

15 years 11 months ago

hi rosina

we all have a place within us where we can hide and feel safe - trouble is we cannot feasibly stay there for long - we have to face reality eventually thanks for your comment love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
Seren

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Judd

Your faeries made me think of our otherworld friends who look after our loved ones ... love and hugs JayCee P.S this made me sad hun hugs ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
I

IKnowNoBox

15 years 11 months ago

rich verses

woven together, to present a tapistry poetic. In ink, Dabbler
judyanne

judyanne

15 years 11 months ago

what a beautiful comment dabbler

thank you very very much and thanks for the visit love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
Mark

Mark

15 years 11 months ago

What a moment !

Thank you.. Mark Resilient Flexibility RUN; when there seems to be no answer common sense will not speak, so run - -go running..
judyanne

judyanne

15 years 11 months ago

thank you mark

love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html