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Jun 14, 2010
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Lightning Strike
Slivered forked lightning striking
from clear azure skies,
literally a bolt from the blue,
should’ve destroyed.
Instead I retreated to a place I remembered
aglow with the lights of a million fairies,
where all colours reflect a golden hue,
and hid.
Under scintillating red suns of blurred battered emotion,
sheltered in the lea of my illusory harbour,
I watched from afar
faltering fish fly over choppy black oceans
and bewildered birds swim through grave clouds of grey,
while the heaving heavens trembled
and the mortal earth wept.
And until the undistorted sordid snakes of reality
ripped me from my sanctuary
into a blazing agony of hovering truth,
I cowered unconscious in a drifting bed of denial.
— judyanne, Jun 14, 2010
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hobo
16 years 1 month ago
very nice
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
thanks randy
shirley harrison
16 years 1 month ago
wow
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
the biggest storm of my life shirley :)
Candlewitch
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Judy
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
hi cat
mand
16 years 1 month ago
Full of wonderful imagery,
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
thanks mand
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Fabulous Judy
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
hi rosina
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Judd
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
yes, and us in our safe-havens
IKnowNoBox
16 years 1 month ago
rich verses
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
what a beautiful comment dabbler
Mark
16 years 1 month ago
What a moment !
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
thank you mark
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