fields of clover rise to bind me

Your pens on fire lately ... brilliant poem ... I am with raskin you gotta get a nice mat so we can all come groveling ;) love ya love and big hugs JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

You always have the perfect word choices. Your lines blend together like twining vines. I couldn't make up my mind between the last or second to last verse. fields of clover rise to bind me with early morning light i am fragile, like the touch of translucent skin, poppy red and parchment thin come bend with me, low to the ground , let us be like apple trees blossoming once again, laden with poems, bruised with words that taste like sweet water. Yes, I agree, you are fragile and it makes one feel protective of you. Always, Cat

I agree with Cat, lovey descriptive words and imagery. Love Mand xxxx

dear Anna, beatiful. your imagery is truly amazing and clover i love! much love shirley harrison

You always manage to give us a wonderful description on all your writes...lovely Anna. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell

i love the whole poem of course - but that last line sticks... love judd xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html

i love that when i come to you there is always something new. like the touch of translucent skin poppy red and parchment thin... this whole poem, fine words from a fine poet. john