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Jun 14, 2010
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petals of want
you touch me
and I fall away
to nothing
breaking apart
into a thousand
petals of want
I am as bewitched
as the trail
that lies beneath
your hand
incantations
sing through my blood
and I am wrought,
with my need
to list into you
at just a touch
I need to inhale
but,
you breath life
into every molecule
to overflow my spirit
and in the essence
of love
I lay in want
of the masters
hand
and to fall as petals
at his feet
— Seren, Jun 14, 2010
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Kailashana
16 years 1 month ago
Beautiful! Reminds me of
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
thanks Mum
CyberSpace
16 years 1 month ago
you know how i feel now get
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
yep you feel real goooood
Candlewitch
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Jayne
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dearest Cat
hobo
16 years 1 month ago
Wow
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Randy
lou
16 years 1 month ago
Wow
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Lou
scribbler
16 years 1 month ago
petals of
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
lmao
mand
16 years 1 month ago
A truly lovely Poem JayCee,
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dearest Mand
shirley harrison
16 years 1 month ago
Gorgeous poetry!
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Shirley
greeneyes
16 years 1 month ago
beautiful
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Elizabeth
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Superb JayCee
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Xena
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
well it has all been said before me
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Thanks Judd (hugs) I
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