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Seren
Seren
Jun 14, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

petals of want

you touch me
and I fall away
to nothing

breaking apart
into a thousand
petals of want

I am as bewitched
as the trail
that lies beneath
your hand

incantations
sing through my blood
and I am wrought,
with my need
to list into you

at just a touch
I need to inhale
but,

you breath life
into every molecule
to overflow my spirit
and in the essence
of love

I lay in want
of the masters
hand 

and to fall as petals
at his feet

— Seren, Jun 14, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Beyond the Black Stump..Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda, P.K.Page, W.H.Auden, to many and various to include them all ...

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Kailashana

Kailashana

15 years 12 months ago

Beautiful! Reminds me of

Beautiful! Reminds me of poetic prasad...an offering to the gods...(in Hindu ritual) Love. ~ "Even if I knew the world were to end tomorrow, I would plant an olive tree today."-- Francis of Assisi
Seren

Seren

15 years 12 months ago

thanks Mum

dont know where this one came from but I like it too thanks heaps love you JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
C

CyberSpace

15 years 12 months ago

you know how i feel now get

you know how i feel now get to bed woman lol love hubby xoxoxoxoxoxox
Seren

Seren

15 years 12 months ago

yep you feel real goooood

yep you feel real goooood lmao love you wifey x x x x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

15 years 12 months ago

Dear Jayne

I feel that this is one of your finest poems, to date! Snake is one lucky man for many reasons. I'm so glad he appreciates you. Love, Cat
Seren

Seren

15 years 12 months ago

Dearest Cat

I am the lucky one hes always there for me no matter want i feel blessed everyday we are together ... hey we fight and when we do ? its epic lol but we make up oh so sweet love and big hugs JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
hobo

hobo

15 years 12 months ago

Wow

Wow this is so good my friend, this is beautiful
Seren

Seren

15 years 12 months ago

Dear Randy

As I said above I dont know where it came from but I like it as well decided to post it last night after someone told me to lol love and hugs JayCee x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
lou

lou

15 years 12 months ago

Wow

Really intimate write. love lou xx
Seren

Seren

15 years 12 months ago

Dear Lou

thanks for the comment happy you liked it hun love JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
S

scribbler

15 years 12 months ago

petals of

Didn't realize you were Paul Hogan's wife Linda HA!HA!you and Lou must be drinking same tonic.very passionate..........scribbler
Seren

Seren

15 years 12 months ago

lmao

funnily enough I used to live about 15mins from the front driveway of Paul Hogans home near Byron Bay and his partner owned a local Tavern in Byron that we used to drink at from time to time lol met him a million years ago he seems like a down to earth bloke to be honest lol ... love and hugs JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
Seren

Seren

15 years 12 months ago

Dearest Mand

You just made my night, thanks for that lovely comment this one came from nowhere its usually where my best ones come from so happy you liked it hun love and hugs JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
SH

shirley harrison

15 years 12 months ago

Gorgeous poetry!

you have such skill This is as amazing as ever! i love your style JC so send some to Florence for me! i could hear a voice whilst reading this and it was sweet and gentle! Much love shirley harrison
Seren

Seren

15 years 12 months ago

Dear Shirley

I dont know about skill but I am passionate about my writing I love it ... will send my muse shes very prolific though ;) be warned there is no rest when serendipities around lol thanks for the lovely comment love and big hugs JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
Seren

Seren

15 years 12 months ago

Elizabeth

Your too kind huni lol I will get a big head ;) haha love to you will be round reading later love and big hugs JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
xena465

xena465

15 years 12 months ago

Superb JayCee

Now that's the kind of love I want...need...want!!! Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell
Seren

Seren

15 years 12 months ago

Dear Xena

You will find this kind of love huni and you will be blissfully happy I trust that a light that shines as brightly as you do, will attract someone who will see you for the beautiful person you are love and big hugs JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
Seren

Seren

15 years 12 months ago

Thanks Judd (hugs) I

Thanks Judd (hugs) I appreciate the read will be round in a couple of hours reading bit busy doing some work at the moment lol no rest for the wicked lol love and hugs JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")