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Dangling...Feet

Dangling ...Feet

As  I sit
feet dangling
from the edge
of this dime

I think
far back
to another
place and time

There is no somehow
There's no asking why
We came here together
Together we cry .

— jetz, Jun 14, 2010

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Region, Country: South eastern Connecticut, USA

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ziggy

15 years 11 months ago

hi

hi there i just had to check your words out i like the first verse the most ,,,,,,,,ziggy,,
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hippiepoet69

15 years 11 months ago

Short & Sweet

but left me wanting more. I guess I'm greedy when it comes to your words. LOL. I better get offfline. My Lady should be getting off work about now. Take Care. huey