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VISION/ Illusion/ delusion (your call)
Like a Maxfield Parrish painting
superimposing
an Ansel Adams photograph
earthy
ethereal
glowing soft
sweet serenity
so striking!
pangs...
waves of pangs
pierce my stubborn sorrows
suddenly... joy!
startling joy!
emancipating
jubilating
" jumping Jehosaphat" joy!
heart, soul,
spirit mind
affixed
I SEE!
I see that... I...
... that all....
are always already
forever alive
Critiques
Kailashana
15 years 12 months ago
Wonderful. I have many
brittle light
15 years 12 months ago
firstly