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Hero of the Black Dawn

 Hero of the black dawn

  Mea culpa,

  Pride of the penniless aristocrat

  Hate of the hungry beggar

  Lust of the staunch believer

  Rage of the confused fool 

  Guilt of the mute psychic

 

  Welcome, welcome

  This paradise forlorn

  This song for you foretold 

 

 Salaam to the tortured soul

 Amen to the disillusioned winner

 Hail the villainous hero

 Encore for the one who cried foul

 The Hero of the black dawn

 

   Mea culpa,

   Confusion of the throne-less ruler

   Pain of the unwanted intellectual

   Disease of expressionless love

   Vanity of the chosen prophet

   Greed of the confident pawn
 

   Welcome, welcome

   This paradise forlorn

   This song for you foretold

  
 Salaam to the tortured soul

 Amen to the disillusioned winner

 Hail the villainous hero

 Encore for the one who cried foul

 The Hero of the black dawn


— Manko, Jun 14, 2010

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club special

15 years 12 months ago

98%

98% of the stuff on this site got nothing on this poem. imagination personified.~ Club Special
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Manko

15 years 11 months ago

2% to go

Hiya 98%, Thanks for your comments - to be honest its my personal favorite piece. Moments of self-pity can often be a dirge of all that we are not. Cheers, Manko