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FOND



coarse care
you make the dare

and held ideas fill flight
in light as sharp as
mercury

is it the eyes full of smile
the brow arched
the careful take
you draw

there is so much more
to you

there is only so much
left of me

— Esker, Jun 13, 2010

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Region, Country: north ontario, CAN

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Esker

Esker

15 years 12 months ago

thank you Patrick

I havent commented yet on your work but read them and enjoy the straight off the hip write one day Im going to leave something esker~