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Jun 13, 2010
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FOND
coarse care
you make the dare
and held ideas fill flight
in light as sharp as
mercury
is it the eyes full of smile
the brow arched
the careful take
you draw
there is so much more
to you
there is only so much
left of me
— Esker, Jun 13, 2010
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Esker
15 years 12 months ago
thank you Patrick