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Ritual Of Elements

Within the span of summits,
apex reach of distance stratified
above thick breadth of life
struggling to survive below,
a taste of clarity dances
on the lip of mind,
expanded into purest thought
by realization of eternity
on rush of raven's midnight wings
that cut the chill of ignorance
with edge of wisdom whispered,
gained by willing sacrifice.

Upon the loneliness of sward,
from watchful strength
concealed deep-turfed,
black-rooted in quiet force
from marching sentinels
of trunk and branch
and green-gold leaf,
the scent of pleasure
rises pungant from the sunlit soil,
an ache of beauty revealed
rich in thudding beat of life
by skirl of distant pipes
and far-off dance of cloven feet,
sweet as new-found hope
drawn near.

In the wash of spiralled heat
that sears away the grime of life
with char of ash embered from
the soiled layering of thoughts
grown stale with city,
certainty burns exultant
through all tired mesh
of weary blood and smothered flesh
to sing of simple joy unfettered
by mere instances of living.

Drawn deep into the flow
of sacredness awash
at faltering feet of aimlessness
that takes all doubtful tread
into the endless cleansing stream
of cool and unrelenting knowledge,
mortality is drowned away,
revealing ripples deep with silver peace
seen blue from under depth of infinite.

At the center of the stillness,
where rushing air feeds reach of fire
rising hot from strength of earth encirled by
all latitudes of depthless water,
the energy lies unsullied,
undreamed by rationality of mind,
stripped of limit by significance,
the ordered chaos brilliant,
the pure reason and precious gift
of universe we call
from deep within as
spirit.




 



— Race_9togo, Jun 13, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Earth Vicinity (within a five light-year radius), ZZC

Favorite Poets: John Donne, T.S. Eliot, Serendipity, Emily Dickenson, Kailashana, Charles Bukowski, Kabir, Rett, Dalton, W. B. Yeats, William Blake, Rainer Maria Rilke, and many other Neopoet poets; Neopoet has heavily influenced my poetry and my ability to write it well.

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Critiques

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

15 years 12 months ago

Dear Jim

This is positively Pagan and all that it entails. I can't pick a favorite verse because they are all excellent. Always, Cat
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

15 years 12 months ago

Cat

Glad that you enjoyed it. Respectfully Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race
Seren

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Jim

I loved this one ... the feel is as Cat said Pagan and its got that earthy rawness about it as well loved this one hun btw I hadnt heard thw word 'sward' before thanks for teaching my my new word for the day lol love and hugs JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

15 years 11 months ago

Jayne

The feel is pagan because - well - its PAGAN LOL. Earth, Air, Fire and Water, and the fifth element, spirit. The five arms of the pentacle, with Self at the center and spirit ascendant. Sward...lol...I almost didn't use it, but nothing else seemed to fit. I am glad that you enjoyed this, Jayne. Respectfully Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race