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Candlewitch

Jun 13, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Inspirations Of Raven

Inspirations of Raven...
by: c.m. mattison

It is Spring here,
...already...
the quality of the rain has
changed to a gentle kiss
of awakening instead of
Winter's raw lament
for the past echoes of Summer.
Soon I will start planting
...Zebra Grass...
around my garden pool.
Once again I will sit
hidden from prying eyes
on my old fashoned wooden bench swing
in that lovely secluded grotto
...listening...
to the crystal tones of my waterfall
while carving figures
(with my pristine blade)
from the bounty of natures
broken limbed droppings
of the trees that shade me...

— Candlewitch, Jun 13, 2010

About the Author

Region, Country: Northwestern Wisconsin USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe, William Blake, Bob Dylan, Tom Petty, Carlos Castaneda, Jim Morrison, the whole of Neopoet and many more., Candlewitch

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16 years 1 month ago

raven

wonderful statement of contented solitude..........scribbler

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Scribbler

Thank you. This was my intention. nice to see you. Always, Cat

Ravenshakti

16 years 1 month ago

Sweet Inspirations...

Pure, sweet, crystal clear, refreshing... Magick! You are a Mistress of the Bright Weaving Art. A sublime poem, dear Cat... Bright Weavings, Raven

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Raven

Thank you dear Raven, I know you understand the spirituality that comes with this poem. Peace from the pagan, Cat

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

WoW Cat

I want to come and live with you. Can I, can I please? Such beautiful images I could almost feel myself right there with you...A wonderful picturesque dream Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Rosina

About seven years ago I lived in Texas and this was my backyard There were a few boulders, a custom made in ground pool with a waterfall. The waterfall had a few settings, so it could be bubbling and splashing, crashing, or gently dribbling. I also had a rose garden and a little pool with water plants and a bridge over the little pool. And there were trees and stepping stones. When we had to move for my hubby's work, I mourned it. Oh, and it all lit up at night with the beautiful lights that my husband had installed. When we sold the house, it was the main feature which sold it. I miss it greatly. Always, Cat

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Cat

One day I would love to sit with you in your private grotto and just be at peace ... wow I want to go there ... wonerful poem different feel to this one loved it love and big hugs JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Jayne

Please see my response to Rosina. I, too, would love to go back there and play. It was in Texas. Even though beautiful, there were times when we were reminded that there was a desert around us. One day we found this HUGE lizard in the swimming pool hanging onto the skimmer for dear life. Steve used a wide board to get him out okay.

16 years 1 month ago

You paint a lovely picture

You paint a lovely picture of peace and quiet just enjoying your surroundings, listening to "the crystal tones of your waterfall". I loved all of your poem but I particularly loved these lines. the quality of the rain has changed to a gentle kiss of awakening instead of Winter’s raw lament for the past echoes of Summer. Thanks for sharing your inspirational words Cat. Love Mand xxxx

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Mand

Where I lived in Texas, it rained all Winter. The Spring rain was quite a relief from the constant sodden drizzle. I'm glad you like those lines. Always, Cat

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shirley harrison

16 years 1 month ago

"Grotto"

beautifully written again ,i have the perfect image and the peace in this poetry i can feel very strongly, if you really have a private grotto then i will just say "wow" i've seen many in my life and i have enjoyed swimming in them mystery surrounds a great Grotto! Breath taking poetry much love shirley harrison

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Shirley

Then both our hearts have been touched by this secret beauty! Thanks for reading and commenting. Love, Cat

16 years 1 month ago

this makes me feel easy

This makes me feel easy in my soul, nice read thank you

16 years 1 month ago

:)

I thank you. Always, Cat

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wolf

16 years 1 month ago

That sounds heavenly, Autumn

That sounds heavenly, Autumn and winter are my favourite seasons, but spring is just as beautiful, great poem.

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Wolf

Thank you for reading. I love Autumn and winter, too, especially as I get older. Always, Cat

16 years 1 month ago

exquisite cat

how beautiful - you took me there with you i feel so relaxed sharing your beautiful place, watching you carve nominated, wish i could do it twice bookmarked i bow to you love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Judy

Thank you for visiting me there. I wish you could have seen it at night all lit up with fairy lights. My hubby created it for me. I miss it so much. Love, Cat

R

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Cat

i will visit again not just because i loved your write but also because i wat to discover the magic if it which has made many before me want to be at the place which you have brought alive magically... as always there is always something novel in your writes... warmly...raj (sublime_ocean)

16 years 1 month ago

Dear raj

Thank you, you are very kind to me. Always, Cat

Z

16 years 1 month ago

hi cat

hello cat i love the detail in this what a place it must of been i can imagine you there tending to your roses looking at your pool and seeing it all lt up at night, and even a waterfall which has to be one of the most relaxing sounds i know you painted a picture with your pen i love it ,,,,,,,,,,zigs

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Ziggy

I'm so glad I could show it to you in your minds eye. Love, Cat

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Dale

I'm happy that you liked my poem about my favorite place on earth. We are working on another paradise, but it won't be the same. I loved sharing this paradise with you. Always, Cat

P

16 years 1 month ago

very lovelya real sense of

very lovely a real sense of tranquility in this piece your words take the reader on a gentle journey with you, in your private grotto i enjoyed every line, and these particularly; "the quality of the rain has changed to a gentle kiss of awakening instead of Winter’s raw lament for the past echoes of Summer." Winter's raw lament...sigh cheers p

16 years 1 month ago

Hello Again

Thank you for both reading and your lovely comment. I'm glad I could show you my inner peace and joy. Always, Cat

16 years 1 month ago

dear ma’am you painted a

dear ma'am you painted a very beautiful world , can i be your guest there. ilove this piece. much love and respect to you chumfin

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Chumfin

I would be glad of your most gracious company. Thank you. Always, Cat

L

16 years 1 month ago

One of your Best!

and they have been many! Beautifully penned as is your wont, and as easy on the ear and eye as on the heart! Bravo Cat!

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Lonnie

Hello my brave Sir. Thank you and a big hug. Always, Cat

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Mari Shine

16 years ago

Beautiful!

Cat, what a very beautiful picture you paint in this delightfully penned poem - it's beauty is breath taking! Your imagery is sharply defined and appeals to the senses, allowing the reader to envision your so special place filled with tranquility and serenity. Thank you for sharing this charming poem Cat. I have enjoyed reading it so much. Blessings & Light, Mari

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