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Jun 13, 2010
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The Pacifier
My mother thought up a cunning plan
my brother from his dummy to wean.
One night into the open fire raging
she threw it – no more to be seen.
All gone she said and he nodded his head
and went to bed quite happy.
The following night again by firelight
she read him his bed-time story.
When she had finished she closed the book
and handed it to him for storing.
All gone he said as he threw the tome
into the hungry flames.
Mum said she never did try that trick again.
— judyanne, Jun 13, 2010
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Candlewitch
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Judy
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
thanks cat
Nordic cloud
16 years 1 month ago
They know you know!
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
no annanya - i haven't posted this before
lou
16 years 1 month ago
Judy
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
a lot of my writes tell a story lou
shirley harrison
16 years 1 month ago
L:O:L
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
hey shirley
shirley harrison
16 years 1 month ago
he could have stuck that on the fire!!! L:O:L
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
just got rid of a rat (i hope)
Candlewitch
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Judy
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
nothing like getting the taste for something eh cat?
IKnowNoBox
16 years 1 month ago
A humorous observation
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
thanks david
scribbler
16 years 1 month ago
pacifier
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
thanks scribbler
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
So, so funny Judy
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
hi rosina
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
glad you found it funny indi
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Judd
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
ditto with the internet
IKnowNoBox
16 years 1 month ago
A fitting example
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
the beginnings of the 'throw away' society?
magics02
16 years 1 month ago
Good one here Judy
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
hi magics
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