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ode to a grecian night

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sand between my toes
and you between my thighs
indigo waters lapping...

the crescent moon sings a lullaby
her sultry tones caress
as you rock me


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— pleiades, Jun 13, 2010

Critiques

Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 1 month ago

Sigh. From here to eternity

Sigh. From here to eternity and back? Sand, indigo waters, your lover and moonlight, what more can anyone want? ~A "Even if I knew the world were to end tomorrow, I would plant an olive tree today."-- Francis of Assisi
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 1 month ago

beautiful

wanted more, while i simply drifted to those indigo waters with the crescent moon serenading. so short, but so descriptive. close my eyes and i'm there - not voyering though :) love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear P

perfectly beautiful reaching to the black past the shoulders of the moon sigh beautiful poem hun love JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
P

pleiades

16 years 1 month ago

reaching to the black past

reaching to the black past the shoulders of the moon mmmm...lovely thanks seren for your kind words i haven't ignored your pm... will respond when i have more time

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