ode to a grecian night

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sand between my toes
and you between my thighs
indigo waters lapping...

the crescent moon sings a lullaby
her sultry tones caress
as you rock me

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— pleiades, Jun 13, 2010

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Kailashana

15 years 12 months ago

Sigh. From here to eternity

Sigh. From here to eternity and back? Sand, indigo waters, your lover and moonlight, what more can anyone want? ~A "Even if I knew the world were to end tomorrow, I would plant an olive tree today."-- Francis of Assisi

pleiades

15 years 12 months ago

well, the bottle of ouzo

well, the bottle of ouzo didn't go astray...

pleiades

15 years 12 months ago

thanks for stopping by

thanks for stopping by indi glad you enjoyed

judyanne

15 years 12 months ago

beautiful

wanted more, while i simply drifted to those indigo waters with the crescent moon serenading. so short, but so descriptive. close my eyes and i'm there - not voyering though :) love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html

pleiades

15 years 12 months ago

you wanted more?imagine how

you wanted more? imagine how i felt! thanks judy

Seren

15 years 12 months ago

Dear P

perfectly beautiful reaching to the black past the shoulders of the moon sigh beautiful poem hun love JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

pleiades

15 years 12 months ago

reaching to the black past

reaching to the black past the shoulders of the moon mmmm...lovely thanks seren for your kind words i haven't ignored your pm... will respond when i have more time