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Jun 13, 2010
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ode to a grecian night
.
sand between my toes
and you between my thighs
indigo waters lapping...
the crescent moon sings a lullaby
her sultry tones caress
as you rock me
.
sand between my toes
and you between my thighs
indigo waters lapping...
the crescent moon sings a lullaby
her sultry tones caress
as you rock me
.
— pleiades, Jun 13, 2010
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Kailashana
16 years 1 month ago
Sigh. From here to eternity
pleiades
16 years 1 month ago
well, the bottle of ouzo
pleiades
16 years 1 month ago
thanks for stopping by
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
beautiful
pleiades
16 years 1 month ago
you wanted more?imagine how
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dear P
pleiades
16 years 1 month ago
reaching to the black past
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