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Jun 12, 2010
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Love ~ 1972
To You
I offer
my cup
of fiery crystal
and frivolous gold
in silence
and with momentous sublimity
I enact
my love-gift:
I pour
the sanguine-coloured
mystique of wine
tasted
in attendance
with the
awakening
of our dream.
I touch
Your glass
in absentia
and propound
a night
of one thousand dreams,
venture into
a demesne
of loving;
I drink
the cold-warm
intoxication
and mellow
into the union,
forever lost
in its somnolence.
Dispassionately alone,
the blatant truth
envelops me:
Had I perceived
the sweet nectar of Paradise
and
never realized You?
Was perfection
ours for a moment's lifetime,
loosing millenia to ourselves?
I drink to you, Love,
Your memories and shadows,
within Your tortuous drink
the truth decries Truth.
The chalice
is emptied,
lonely drops of
blood-red liquid
dance inside as
in final recollection
Your face of Love
mirrored in my bitter cup,
And I ached to possess
Your visage for only a moment
longer,
my tears,
flowing warm and gentle,
deprived my illusion of You.
I salute You,
Love,
with outstretched hand,
reaching,
I clasp
Your cup,
and crush
Your victory.
~A
I offer
my cup
of fiery crystal
and frivolous gold
in silence
and with momentous sublimity
I enact
my love-gift:
I pour
the sanguine-coloured
mystique of wine
tasted
in attendance
with the
awakening
of our dream.
I touch
Your glass
in absentia
and propound
a night
of one thousand dreams,
venture into
a demesne
of loving;
I drink
the cold-warm
intoxication
and mellow
into the union,
forever lost
in its somnolence.
Dispassionately alone,
the blatant truth
envelops me:
Had I perceived
the sweet nectar of Paradise
and
never realized You?
Was perfection
ours for a moment's lifetime,
loosing millenia to ourselves?
I drink to you, Love,
Your memories and shadows,
within Your tortuous drink
the truth decries Truth.
The chalice
is emptied,
lonely drops of
blood-red liquid
dance inside as
in final recollection
Your face of Love
mirrored in my bitter cup,
And I ached to possess
Your visage for only a moment
longer,
my tears,
flowing warm and gentle,
deprived my illusion of You.
I salute You,
Love,
with outstretched hand,
reaching,
I clasp
Your cup,
and crush
Your victory.
~A
— Kailashana, Jun 12, 2010
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Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dearest Mum
Kailashana
16 years 1 month ago
Lol, dearest. I wrote this
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
beautiful anna
Kailashana
16 years 1 month ago
Yup. Those would be my
CyberSpace
16 years 1 month ago
Mum
mand
16 years 1 month ago
You have an incredible way
raskin
16 years 1 month ago
I clasp your cup and crush
Restlesslittlesoul
16 years 1 month ago
WOW!
scribbler
16 years 1 month ago
love
Restlesslittlesoul
16 years 1 month ago
Even if...
lou
16 years 1 month ago
Lovely
shirley harrison
16 years 1 month ago
Breathtaking!
Chris B
16 years 1 month ago
Inspired
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
What can I say Anna?
Nordic cloud
16 years 1 month ago
...and over the brim your poem spills.
RobertKnott
16 years 1 month ago
... "and in the silence,
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