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Love ~ 1972

To You
I offer
my cup
of fiery crystal
and frivolous gold
in silence
and with momentous sublimity
I enact
my love-gift:
I pour
the sanguine-coloured
mystique of wine
tasted
in attendance
with the
awakening
of our dream.
I touch
Your glass
in absentia
and propound
a night
of one thousand dreams,
venture into
a demesne
of loving;
I drink
the cold-warm
intoxication
and mellow
into the union,
forever lost
in its somnolence.

Dispassionately alone,
the blatant truth
envelops me:
Had I perceived
the sweet nectar of Paradise
and
never realized You?
Was perfection
ours for a moment's lifetime,
loosing millenia to ourselves?

I drink to you, Love,
Your memories and shadows,
within Your tortuous drink
the truth decries Truth.

The chalice
is emptied,
lonely drops of
blood-red liquid
dance inside as
in final recollection
Your face of Love
mirrored in my bitter cup,
And I ached to possess
Your visage for only a moment
longer,
my tears,
flowing warm and gentle,
deprived my illusion of You.

I salute You,
Love,
with outstretched hand,
reaching,
I clasp
Your cup,
and crush
Your victory.


~A
— Kailashana, Jun 12, 2010

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Seren

Seren

15 years 12 months ago

Dearest Mum

You have outdone yourself this time .... I am in awe of this poem I bow to the mistress of words sigh sigh sigh sigh sigh love and hugs JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
Kailashana

Kailashana

15 years 12 months ago

Lol, dearest. I wrote this

Lol, dearest. I wrote this poem in 1972, changed the Thee to You. Anna's muse has left the building with her heart infused. ~A "Even if I knew the world were to end tomorrow, I would plant an olive tree today."-- Francis of Assisi
judyanne

judyanne

15 years 12 months ago

beautiful anna

i especially relate to and love - 'And I ached to possess Your visage for only a moment longer, my tears, flowing warm and gentle, deprived my illusion of You' love and hugs judd xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
Kailashana

Kailashana

15 years 12 months ago

Yup. Those would be my

Yup. Those would be my favourite lines too. Except for my *crushing*. Thanks for the read and comment dear Judd. ~ "Even if I knew the world were to end tomorrow, I would plant an olive tree today."-- Francis of Assisi
C

CyberSpace

15 years 12 months ago

Mum

thanks for the comment on my poem it was beautiful Bobby was very dear to me he was like a second dad and he wasnt my boss he was my mate and what Jayne said about your poem love snake xoxo
mand

mand

15 years 12 months ago

You have an incredible way

You have an incredible way with words, you tap into another universe and bring it into ours. Lovely Ann Love Mand xxxxx
R

Restlesslittlesoul

15 years 12 months ago

WOW!

Sublime! That is all I can say right now... http://restlesslittlesoul.webs.com
S

scribbler

15 years 12 months ago

love

Wrote in 1972? great work for a 5 yr. old!I almost never comment on free verse structure and really hesitate to do so on poem written so long ago.Having said that, on I barge.It seems it may have read better by combining many of the lines? ..........scribbler
R

Restlesslittlesoul

15 years 12 months ago

Even if...

I am ignorant, according to you, I can recognize a great poetic talent when I see it. I wonder if my sacred ants would agree with me... http://restlesslittlesoul.webs.com
lou

lou

15 years 12 months ago

Lovely

Well written love lou xx
SH

shirley harrison

15 years 12 months ago

Breathtaking!

5 stars is not enough, i cant believe you wrote this so long ago, its wonderful wonderful! much love Anna shirley harrison
CB

Chris B

15 years 12 months ago

Inspired

Good flow, great passion.
xena465

xena465

15 years 12 months ago

What can I say Anna?

It's all been said before me. This proves you've always had the gift, as you wrote this excellent poem all those years ago. Xena
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

15 years 12 months ago

...and over the brim your poem spills.

Ann of Norway You crush the essences from out the saddest fruits and paint with sweet acidic dreams our glass as sensed and hovering their vapours rise, transform our eyes to wells so deep that all the weeping of your longing fills and over the brim your poem spills. Anna, my sister Anna, sigh!
R

RobertKnott

15 years 12 months ago

... "and in the silence,

raindrops fell." interesting coincidence; i was a student of St. Francis of Assisi in 1972. well done. Passion is often misunderstood as vehement anger only; though is one passion 'tis true. It is also known as a dove; a more peaceful chalice -hearted love.