Acid Rain

Acid rain drops fall
Like tears slipping down a face
onto the world’s crops

A haiku poem

line 1 =5 syllables
line 2 = 7 syllables
line 3 = 5 syllables

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— lou, Jun 12, 2010

About the Author

Region, Country: West London, GBR

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda , Jack Kerouac, Alan Ginsberg, D.H Lawrence, Jim Morrison's lyrics,

Critiques

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

Acid Rain

Oh dear Lou, a horrible truth to come. Xena

lou

16 years 1 month ago

Xena

hope not love lou xx

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Great Senryu ... only one thing for it to be vaild you have to also have a link to the page you used for reference on how to write it ... as its on the competition page rules, just so you know and can fix it before the end of the month love JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

lou

16 years 1 month ago