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princees of darkness
Jun 11, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

wonders of the mind

i am drowing in
the darkness of my mind
the evils of my mind
have made me give up the fight
to live
the emptyness swallows me whole
will
you be my life preserver
or my reason
to die
in the river of my
mind
— princees of darkness, Jun 11, 2010

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xena465

xena465

15 years 12 months ago

Welcome to Neo Princees

Very strong feelings in this write. I'll be your life preserver, so there's no need to think about dying. I guess we all feel like this sometimes. With me, more often than I care to say; so you’re not alone in these suffocating emotions. Just remember this and hopefully these despairing thoughts will dissipate. Xena
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princees of darkness

15 years 12 months ago

thank you

the only time i relly think these are at school when all you want to do is get out of it and i would nver kill myself do to the fact blood sickens me but thanks for saying you would be my life preserver - princees
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thegodshatter2

15 years 12 months ago

heeellllooooo…….. i am

heeellllooooo........ i am enjoying your writes so far friend. you have great imagination and a willingness to put it on paper or, computer..... w.e. anyway, i'm not gonna talk your face off your head but...... come check my writes if if go the time and leave some comments. i would enjoy that very much. thanks. hope to hear from you in the future. peace sincerely, Josh S Smith (God Shatter)