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Jun 11, 2010
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Diminutive World
It’s a big world, our orb
so many countries and cities within
We travel to have heat, cold; pleasure
escape the silence or din.
When I travel, it’s so distant
further than I want to be
My definition of abroad
is going to Saltcoats by the sea.
I’ve never travelled on a big ship
my brothers fly to Spain
When I make a great journey
I go to England by train.
I’ve never flown on a plane
don’t even have a passport
I journey all the way from Scotland
to good ole Blackpool resort.
The thing is, the world I live in
is too big for someone like me
I may appear to be a simpleton
but I’m far from that, you see.
Some of us are meant for bigger things
to learn, teach or travel the planet
My world is big enough
to build it, takes a minuscule of granite.
— xena465, Jun 11, 2010
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Kailashana
15 years 12 months ago
“The journey of a thousand
xena465
15 years 12 months ago
Yes Anna
sunscreen
15 years 12 months ago
Great write mom, hopefully
xena465
15 years 12 months ago
Thanks Alex
sunscreen
15 years 12 months ago
You better be there in body
xena465
15 years 12 months ago
Teh he,
judyanne
15 years 12 months ago
love it rosina
xena465
15 years 12 months ago
Thank you Judy
scribbler
15 years 12 months ago
world
xena465
15 years 12 months ago
Hey Handsome…
Seren
15 years 12 months ago
I love being at home but I
xena465
15 years 12 months ago
Awe JayCee...
shirley harrison
15 years 12 months ago
Home sweet Home!
xena465
15 years 12 months ago
Yeh I know why?
shirley harrison
15 years 12 months ago
well spotted
xena465
15 years 12 months ago
And good luck England
mand
15 years 12 months ago
Great poem Xena, well
xena465
15 years 12 months ago
Thank you so much Mand
shirley harrison
15 years 12 months ago
wrong attitude!
xena465
15 years 12 months ago
Oh Dear!!!
anonymous1
15 years 12 months ago
my sentiments exactly.
xena465
15 years 12 months ago
Thanks Lisa
magics02
15 years 12 months ago
Xena my lady friend
xena465
15 years 12 months ago
Thanks Mona
rogerramjet365
15 years 12 months ago
Hi
xena465
15 years 12 months ago
Thank you Rog
lou
15 years 12 months ago
Satisfaction
xena465
15 years 12 months ago
So true Lou
DawningDaytripper
15 years 12 months ago
I like your story, and very
xena465
15 years 12 months ago
Thanks Julie
Mari Shine
15 years 11 months ago
In reading this delightfully
xena465
15 years 11 months ago
Wow a big step!