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Peter Vision
Peter Vision
When I was but a child
I spent much time alone
My siblings were all older
and seldom were at home
My Dad and Mom were busy
as parents often are
Was then I discovered the ability
to dream upon the stars
I learned with imagination
that anything can be
I came to live inside a world
that only I could see
I had this "friend" called Peter
forever at my side
And through it all, he was there
whether I laughed or cried
I recall it all so clearly
what a precocious child I was
Thinking back, my Mom a saint
so patient with her love
The extra plate at dinner
the ever empty chair
And boy the way I raised the roof
if ANYONE sat there
And Peter...oh poor Peter
the mischief he got in
Whenever something was wrong
you know that it was him
Not me...oh no, the angel
not Daddys little girl
Peter.... yes... dear Peter
me and him...alone..my world
Too funny now he's surfaced
been gone so many years
But somehow now I feel him
hear his sobs, as I cry my tears
Do you think that he was waiting
for the perfect time and place
Perhaps he just got tired
fifty years in that dark space
Guess it doesn't really matter
if he's here, I'll be ok
Peter , ever faithful
just like then, in olden days
With this too, he'll help me cope
by my side, never alone
So tonight.....a chair is empty
for you Peter..welcome home.
Critiques
magics02
15 years 12 months ago
Wow Jetz
jetz
15 years 12 months ago
Hi Mona, Thanks for your
Lonnie
15 years 12 months ago
Excellent and insightful!
jetz
15 years 12 months ago
Hi Lonnie, Nice to see you.
SophieHannah24
15 years 12 months ago
Two thumbs WAY up!
jetz
15 years 12 months ago
Hi SophieHannah, Nice to
SophieHannah24
15 years 12 months ago
Two thumbs WAY up!
scribbler
15 years 12 months ago
peter
jetz
15 years 12 months ago
Thank you dear, for your
jetz
15 years 12 months ago
Hi Scribbler, Thanks for
judyanne
15 years 12 months ago
i love this sue
jetz
15 years 12 months ago
Hi Judy, OMG, my Mom would
hippiepoet69
15 years 11 months ago
chuckles and then tears