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MY OLD COAT

I've had my old coat quite a while
  together we've walked many a mile
  worn it when I hunt and fish
  just any time that I might wish

All buttons are brown except one
  went missing one day having fun
  replaced with same sized one of red
  sewn on one night right before bed

The collars gotten kind of frayed
  not quite the same shape as when made
  the years have moulded it to be
  exactly right, contoured for me

The sheepskin liners not as white
  nor outside plaid as crisp and bright
  as on the day it was first worn
  so long ago one frosty morn

Despite its many mends and patches
  my temperment it closely matches
  we're both a little old and beat
  and I think thats kind of neat

And though I often catch a glance
  of folks looking a bit askance
  at me as I wear it around
  they often grin and seldom frown

I guess we all have something we wear
  as we go places, here and there
  an item with which we emote
  for me its my well-worn plaid coat
— scribbler, Jun 10, 2010

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About the Author

Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Frost, Burns, Longfellow, Poe, and Johnson. I guess you've noticed these are all past masters. Other than folks on site I don't read any contemporary poets .

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magics02

15 years 12 months ago

Oh Scribe!!

How nice to see you and when I seen your pic I had to take a second look. You look just like my brother, I almost fell off the chair, amazing and he wears a hat too. Unbelievable and same features and all, thanks for the poem and the smiling face. I like this one and I too got some of those oldie clothes even my old bell bottoms, and of course they do not fit. LOL Nice one here and nice again to see the look of the man behind his words. Bravo Love,Mona xoxoxo
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scribbler

15 years 12 months ago

coat

Mona ,please give your brother my condolences lol ! thanks for visit
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magics02

15 years 12 months ago

I can not wait to show him this pic of you

I will have to send you a pic of him I got him a shirt it says Big Daddy on it for he is 52 years old with a three year old and my he looks just like you. I can't stop looking at your pic. I also see the beauty of where you are writing and always nice to see someone with pen and pad in hand. Your a great guy you know it and I told you so. Love at ya and hugs a bunch Mona xoxoxo
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Lonnie

15 years 12 months ago

Great read!

and truly worthy of five stars! You've captured the emotion we all feel at times for a piece of clothing or some other object, and brought it to life in a way that all can relate to! Bravo!
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scribbler

15 years 12 months ago

old coat

Thanks Lonnie.Nothing quite as comfortable as old clothes and old friends.
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poewriter58

15 years 12 months ago

Scribe

What a warmly written poem. Your rhyming is spot on. This was such a pleasure to read. As I read I thought of the many things I had to part with . I'm usually that way about my shoes lol. Your words were very descriptive easy to visualize. Chrys
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scribbler

15 years 12 months ago

coat

Thanks for dropping by and warm comment.Simple treasures are often most prized don't you think?.........scribbler
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shirley harrison

15 years 12 months ago

"lovely"

ah stan your a coat of many colors! you really make me smile! shirley harrison
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scribbler

15 years 12 months ago

coat

Hey,Shirley!appreciate visit.Always glad to bring smile to face.Hope mine didn't break your screen...........scribbler
xena465

xena465

15 years 12 months ago

Great Stan

I've got a coat like that; I call it my comfy coat. It’s a dowdy looking army-green colour, and very unflattering. When I wear it, it makes me look like I’ve made no effort to dress well; but it sure feels comfy. Xena
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scribbler

15 years 12 months ago

coat

Can you tell I'm no "fashion horse"?lol Thanks for coming by.......Stan
xena465

xena465

15 years 12 months ago

Love your pic

It's so nice to meet you at last. I think you're adorable x Xena
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scribbler

15 years 12 months ago

pic

you should see my other body which is in the shoplol
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shirley harrison

15 years 12 months ago

i disagree!

Stan the man, i would like to tickle you all over, you sexy beast! shirley harrison
judyanne

judyanne

15 years 12 months ago

love this scribble scribbler

so glad your writing hand survived the accident with the truck !!! this is such an easy read - rhythm and rhyme faultless imho old clothes fit like old friends do they not? love judy xxx ps - great to see your face smiley http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
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scribbler

15 years 12 months ago

coat

Lucky all of brains in little finger HA!thanks for visit,comment, and yes they do.....scribbler
mand

mand

15 years 12 months ago

He he he! Ya cool poem, who

He he he! Yeh cool poem, who hasn't got an old pair of shoes, coat etc that fits just right. Really liked this poem, flowed nicely, funny, nostalgic. Well done. Love Mand..xxx
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scribbler

15 years 12 months ago

coat

thanks for visit,kind comments and being friend..........scribbler
Seren

Seren

15 years 12 months ago

Stan

I have a black coat I've been wearing for years its kept me warm many a winter(like Now lol) ... the scarf that goes with it comes from scotland lol my ex husband's family gave it to me love and hugs JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
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scribbler

15 years 12 months ago

coat

new stuff just doesn't fit right does it? thanks for visit........scribbler
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anonymous1

15 years 12 months ago

How have you managed...

...to keep your well worn coat out of the clutches of your wifey? I enjoyed this lively poem especially the 5th stanza where you compare it to you! Clever and original writing. Well done. Thank you, Lisa
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scribbler

15 years 12 months ago

coat

She stays out of my closet and I stay out of hers lol.thanks for read and kind words........scribbler