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WE DANCED A VISIT TO THE CEMETERY
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You took me to the graves of your ancestors,
to understand your poem Joe,
but instead of night and dark and damp,
and woe,
we danced,
you took my hand and led me in,
we saw some great big stones,
some edifices strange and gaunt,
along the avenues, at each cross
we did a spin, and wild flowers echoed too,
as if they knew,
for they are there from day to night
and back to day again.
Then as the sun set in the west
the spectres came right out,
and soon a dance hall came about.
We hailed your mother's sisters, brothers,
aunts and uncles too,
and all came out to join us, prancing in the dew,
then as we did the final waltz,
sweet music could be heard,
from all the leaves in every tree,
and even songs of birds,
and when the darkness swallowed all,
and blackness ruled the hour,
it was as if we disappeared like dreams
contented so it seems,
as then we did retire,
and left a spray of new white stars,
to decorate the tombs,
where all their spirits blink and smile.
high up and out of sight,
we whisper you a fond goodnight.
Critiques
Kailashana
15 years 12 months ago
I love this poem!Dance
judyanne
15 years 12 months ago
ditto to anna's comment annanya
Dalton
15 years 12 months ago
and because i also have a
Dalton
15 years 12 months ago
also loved the title
SophieHannah24
15 years 12 months ago
Cadence
magics02
15 years 12 months ago
Ann just awesome
xena465
15 years 12 months ago
Just so like you Ann