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Nosegay

 

Drifting nostalgia from freshly turned soil,

raw sweet aroma of virgin breath born

incites my heart to manifest a memory

of a lifetime ago before it was torn.

 

So I close my eyes and around me space billows.

A curtain opens, a stage is revealed.

The light of my past calls softly to me

and I return to a scene that count has concealed.

 

Shadows shimmer in rippling deep eddies.

Melodious tones of times now long gone.

Fresh paint, new carpet, pristine polished timber.

The feel and the comfort of my very first home.

 

There in my tower of dreams now broken

in the dulcet frangipani of mind,

echo sounds of youth and untarnished laughter

and shades drift past on conceptions sublime.

 

Spry, vibrant, alive, strong and flexible,

the oyster spread prior to tears.

With the taste of innocence before great learning

I smell essences of my prefatory years.

 

— judyanne, Jun 10, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Western Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Favourite poets? So many, so varied. I like particular songs, not necessarily the singer... and the same goes for poetry. I can honestly say though, that Alfred Noyes' The Highwayman was what inspired my love of poetry - my mother began reading it to me when I was still a baby, and it became my favourite bedtime story

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shirley harrison

15 years 12 months ago

i love your poetry!

breath taking and i was almost bowing while i was reading you are a total joy Judy! shirley harrison
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magics02

15 years 12 months ago

Judy Anne

Loved it and the image I got was you in the house and all the sounds of laughter and love around the home, what once was shall forever be, the memories. I know you shall always keep those memories alive and know when you sit with those memories there are those who are sitting right beside you. Great one here Love Mona xoxox
judyanne

judyanne

15 years 12 months ago

thanks magics

smell is an amazing memory jogger isn't it? love judy xx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
xena465

xena465

15 years 12 months ago

Gee Judy this is so good

Smell is the weirdest thing sometimes. I’ve often caught the whiff of something and it triggers a memory of many yesterdays. Just the other day I passed an old woman and she smelled of `Pama Violets`, I think that’s how you spell it? I don’t know if you remember them. They were little blue sweets that had a wonderful taste and smell from when I was a child. Xena
judyanne

judyanne

15 years 12 months ago

thanks rosina

yes, smell is the strongest memory bringer i think never heard of pama violets - maybe we didn't have them here - or maybe we called them by another name thanks for your support love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

15 years 12 months ago

...with each our parallel memories,

Ann of Norway Smell and sound and sight and mind and all the elements of arousing our thought's attics to see beyond the flat face of today, through your billowing curtains of memory we peep with you and hear and taste and sense the atmosphere and are there too, with each our parallel memories, that make a cadence of sound with yours and carry us too, back to the past where all the world was new and beautiful and untarnished by the tooth of time, yes you can do it judyanne you can and have, Love as always from Ann.
judyanne

judyanne

15 years 12 months ago

annanya

what a beautiful comment thank you love and hugs judyanne xxxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
Seren

Seren

15 years 12 months ago

Dear Judd

This poem reminds me of another poem ... its written by Judith Wright I will find it tomorrow and share it with you well done lol btw you are getting some pictures in the morning lol I am sending some of the baby ;) love and hugs JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
judyanne

judyanne

15 years 12 months ago

well that's a compliment

as i like judith wright's writings. thanks jc looking forward to seeing the baby photos (btw - speaking of photos - i never did receive the ones of the lights in the sky. did you end up sending them?) love and hugs back at yu judd xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
Seren

Seren

15 years 12 months ago

Ive got a few Judith Wright

Ive got a few Judith Wright books ... and I dont think I ever did get round to sending those pictures will send them for you with the baby pics ... ;) im going to bed just cooked a pot of pea and ham soup at 4am yup i am mad lol couldnt sleep so I cook I shoulda been italian bene love and hugs JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
judyanne

judyanne

15 years 12 months ago

what else is there to do at four in the morning?

mind you - pea and ham soup is as dangerous as baked beans i think. still waiting for the ufo photos (no pressure, just wondering if you sent them and i didn't receive them,) so love the photo of bub - wonderful innocence love and hugs judd xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
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CyberSpace

15 years 12 months ago

Great poem Judyanne regards

Great poem Judyanne regards snake thanks for the comment on my new poem
judyanne

judyanne

15 years 12 months ago

thanks for visiting snake

your comment is appreciated lol judy xx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html