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Jun 10, 2010
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Double Thunder's Roar
I sing softly
the songs of my core
would more understand
a thunderous roar?
Well, I'd roar up a storm
if I thought that were true
and spill chilling water on
...who knows who!
I'd blow out the blindness
from eyes filled of dew
bomblast the deaf- ear'd
who whine for thier due
I would shreik up a shroud
of bold doom day clouds
tongues would fall limp,
thus culling the crowd
more understood?
maybe... who knows?
still, I'll sing softly
the songs of my soul
the songs of my core
would more understand
a thunderous roar?
Well, I'd roar up a storm
if I thought that were true
and spill chilling water on
...who knows who!
I'd blow out the blindness
from eyes filled of dew
bomblast the deaf- ear'd
who whine for thier due
I would shreik up a shroud
of bold doom day clouds
tongues would fall limp,
thus culling the crowd
more understood?
maybe... who knows?
still, I'll sing softly
the songs of my soul
— brittle light, Jun 10, 2010
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Candlewitch
15 years 11 months ago
Hello
brittle light
15 years 11 months ago
and a hello to you