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HEROE

A toddler playing by the street
  just sitting there and looking sweet
  and from my old front porch swing
  this old fart can hear him sing

As I sit on ageing rear
  I hear a far truck shifting gear
  the little boy, he doesn't heed
  guess for him there is no need

I swing, my eyes begin to droop
  about to doze off on my stoop
  but just as I'm about to nap
  my eyes reopen with a snap

They must have seen at the last minute
  image of road with child now in it
  truck racing now around the bend
  now realize how this will end

Launch out of swing on aching knees
  now seeing truck come through the trees
  driver talking on cell phone
  kid unaware and all alone

RUN old fool across the yard !!
  accelerate you tub of lard !
  child's eyes turn up to racing truck
  his limbs are frozen, thunderstruck

Push legs, push! to be in time
  those rigs can't stop on a thin dime !
  as feet hit pavement I now see
  the truck may very well beat me

"Not in this life ! " I quickly think
  and dive, the kid's life on the brink
  hands push him out of way in time
  the truc..........




— scribbler, Jun 09, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Frost, Burns, Longfellow, Poe, and Johnson. I guess you've noticed these are all past masters. Other than folks on site I don't read any contemporary poets .

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shirley harrison

15 years 12 months ago

wow Stan

very very imaginative i can see this so clear! so i'm guessing that the old fart took the weight of the truck? This is a brilliant poem! shirley harison
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scribbler

15 years 12 months ago

hero

thanks Shirley.As for protagonist,of course he.......lol....scribbler
judyanne

judyanne

15 years 12 months ago

excellent you hero you

i for one will miss you scribbler, so sad that truck got you love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
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scribbler

15 years 12 months ago

heroe

One twitching writing hand survived.Thanks for visit
xena465

xena465

15 years 12 months ago

Very imaginative Stan

Super write as always. To save the life of a child from an oncoming truck is courageous. I'm so glad you're still here to write this great poem. Just one thing I notice about the title….... {Heroe} ……….should be [Hero] Xena
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scribbler

15 years 12 months ago

heroe

thanks for always finding work worth commenting on.Wondered who would catch intentional(for once) misspell. Imperfect title for imperfect hero.fondly......scribbler
jetz

jetz

15 years 12 months ago

Fantastic. Your words

Fantastic. Your words pulled me right in and kept me on the edge. Like reading a good book, I didn't want it to end. Certainly not as it did, but then, your ending was perfect. Nice writing, indeed. Your rhyme and rhythm were right on. Sue
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scribbler

15 years 12 months ago

heroe

thank you so much for the read and kind words.....scribbler
Seren

Seren

15 years 12 months ago

Dear Stan

That ending is really superb ... one of the best I have seen in an age ... very clever well done love and hugs JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
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scribbler

15 years 12 months ago

heroe

Thanks for coming by,Seren.Appreciate comment on ending.Too many heroes are dead heroes........scribbler