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Jun 09, 2010
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un-evolved
some claim people are the worst
it is not people
it's things,
ipods, passing trains, cars
with a v8 engine and
a singing boot.
no person makes that much noise
things do,
apes do not
ants will purvey
and bees reach maximum
efficiency.
the day a hooded ape
drives a hooded up skyline GTR
with a stolen hood ornament, and hood,
it is then I will know
we have
evolved.
the day ants align with bees
to kill spiders
in order to stop silk terrorism
it is then i will know
we have
evolved.
the day i trade in my black
hooded up car
with a swish hood ornament,
vivacous sound system,
12 inch woofer intact
it is then i will know
how much
they are
worth.
— bloke, Jun 09, 2010
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Kailashana
16 years ago
Some really good stuff here.