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un-evolved

some claim people are the worst
it is not people
it's things,
ipods, passing trains, cars
with a v8 engine and
a singing boot.

no person makes that much noise
things do,
apes do not
ants will purvey
and bees reach maximum
efficiency.

the day a hooded ape
drives a hooded up skyline GTR
with a stolen hood ornament, and hood,
it is then I will know
we have
evolved.

the day ants align with bees
to kill spiders
in order to stop silk terrorism
it is then i will know
we have
evolved.

the day i trade in my black
hooded up car
with a swish hood ornament,
vivacous sound system,
12 inch woofer intact
it is then i will know

how much  
they are
worth.

— bloke, Jun 09, 2010

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years ago

Some really good stuff here.

Some really good stuff here. Thanks for sharing. ~ "Even if I knew the world were to end tomorrow, I would plant an olive tree today."-- Francis of Assisi