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Lover In The Dark
Listen closely,I've
A story to tell,
How I was seduced,
Where dark things dwell
I was weary of sunlight,
That shone on my face,
Tired of the shame,
Sick of the disgrace.
I needed the shadows,
To hide me away,
Lead me to darkness,
Take me away from the day.
So one night when the moon,
Shone in the blackest of sky,
I prayed to my lover,
Hoped he would hear my cry.
I wish to dance in the twilight,
I sang straight to his heart,
I'll be your nocturnal princess,
Tell me where do i start.
Then I felt his breath,
Like wind in my hair,
He voice was so soothing,
Filled with loving and care.
I felt his ice cold touch,
Bring me into his chest,
I felt my body tingle,
As he touched my breast.
"I am Death," he whispered,
"Now you belong to me,"
Then he kissed me with such passion,
I could no longer see.
"Listen to me,"
"My little treasure,"
Fucking the King of the Dead,
Will bring you such pleasure."
Then he took me again,
With a bone chilling kiss,
He dragged me to Hell,
To live in abyss.
I now miss the light,
Seeing the sun would be great,
But I have dug my own grave,
And now its to late.
Critiques
Roscoe Lane
16 years 1 month ago
We should,
wolf
16 years 1 month ago
spine thrilling, excellently
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Elizabeth
johan
16 years 1 month ago
very good wording. it
greeneyes
16 years 1 month ago
Thanks to everyone
rogerramjet365
16 years 1 month ago
Brilliant
greeneyes
16 years 1 month ago
Thanks so much! Its nice to
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