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Lover In The Dark

Listen closely,I've
  A story to tell,
How I was seduced,
Where dark things dwell

I was weary of sunlight,
That shone on my face,
Tired of the shame,
Sick of the disgrace.

I needed the shadows,
To hide me away,
Lead me to darkness,
Take me away from the day.

So one night when the moon,
Shone in the blackest of sky,
I prayed to my lover,
Hoped he would hear my cry.

I wish to  dance in the twilight,
I sang straight to his heart,
I'll be your nocturnal princess,
Tell me where do i start.

Then I felt his breath,
Like wind in my hair,
He voice  was so soothing,
Filled with loving and care.

I felt his ice cold touch,
Bring me into his chest,
I felt my body tingle,
As he touched my breast.

"I am Death," he whispered,
"Now you belong to me,"
Then he kissed me with such passion,
I could no longer see.

"Listen to me,"
"My little treasure,"
Fucking the King of the Dead,
Will bring you such pleasure."

Then he took me again,
With a bone chilling kiss,
He dragged me to Hell,
To live in  abyss.

I now miss the light,
Seeing the sun would be great,
But I have dug my own grave,
And now its to late.




 

 

— greeneyes, Jun 09, 2010

About the Author

Country/Region: Colorado Springs Colorado

Favorite Poets: I love Dr. Suess! He is my favorite, I would love to write for children.

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Roscoe Lane

Roscoe Lane

16 years 1 month ago

We should,

Be careful what we wish for, line 3 verse 6, did you not mean, His voice was so soothing. Great story, great poem. Love Roscoe...
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Elizabeth

wonderful story great poem ... love and hugs JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
R

rogerramjet365

16 years 1 month ago

Brilliant

What a fantastic story which exercises the imagination Love Roger x

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