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Lover In The Dark
Listen closely,I've
A story to tell,
How I was seduced,
Where dark things dwell
I was weary of sunlight,
That shone on my face,
Tired of the shame,
Sick of the disgrace.
I needed the shadows,
To hide me away,
Lead me to darkness,
Take me away from the day.
So one night when the moon,
Shone in the blackest of sky,
I prayed to my lover,
Hoped he would hear my cry.
I wish to dance in the twilight,
I sang straight to his heart,
I'll be your nocturnal princess,
Tell me where do i start.
Then I felt his breath,
Like wind in my hair,
He voice was so soothing,
Filled with loving and care.
I felt his ice cold touch,
Bring me into his chest,
I felt my body tingle,
As he touched my breast.
"I am Death," he whispered,
"Now you belong to me,"
Then he kissed me with such passion,
I could no longer see.
"Listen to me,"
"My little treasure,"
Fucking the King of the Dead,
Will bring you such pleasure."
Then he took me again,
With a bone chilling kiss,
He dragged me to Hell,
To live in abyss.
I now miss the light,
Seeing the sun would be great,
But I have dug my own grave,
And now its to late.
Critiques
Roscoe Lane
16 years ago
We should,
wolf
16 years ago
spine thrilling, excellently
Seren
16 years ago
Dear Elizabeth
johan
16 years ago
very good wording. it
greeneyes
16 years ago
Thanks to everyone
rogerramjet365
15 years 12 months ago
Brilliant
greeneyes
15 years 12 months ago
Thanks so much! Its nice to