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1 a.m Ponderings

Light illuminates everything
Does it not?
Without Light this world would be plunged in darkness...
Would it not?
Light, a soft glow, or a brilliant ray, gratly effects all around it.
It casts a shadow, reveals whats hidden , chases away storm clouds to reveal calmer waters....

So does light come to my aid.
A candle, a lamp, the thinnest ray of sunshine, illuminates my world and lifts my spirits, giving it a light -starved demeanor as if I had been born and raised in darkness. Maybe I have....
                                              But how is it that one seemingly insignificant component, one "minor" factor, however good or bad, can affect our world so completely, or influence an idea so plainly and simply, that all evidence of inspiration can be traced back to it without reproof or fault? How does it remain blameless?

                               Is there a threat in light? A hidden danger? A concealed weapon, perhaps? Can light itself be blamed for revealing to man what is right in fron tof him? Can it be held accountable for reavealing secrets, plots, and schemes?
Light does not control itself, it must be wielded.....but how then is it not a weapon? Light must be then the counterpart to a weapon.....a shield! An expression of freedom, a breaker of bondage....

What is light? Some believe it is any principle, concept or actual matter that is wholesome, fruitful, good, and right.
Am I mad?
If I am, I have gone now to far to return. But here is my theory:

Light is a necessary, weapon-less shield, a deliverer, an ignorant power until it is indeed taught, a bringer of hidden things to view, a weak thing until fed, and abhorred thing until properly understood......
I am mad.
— SophieHannah24, Jun 08, 2010

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Beauregard

Beauregard

16 years ago

Sophie,

Four AM Ponderings We're title sisters! LOL :) Ahh, but without darkness, we would not know what light is! Without the opposite (darkness) there would be no such thing as "light". Like without "hot" how are we to distinguish "cold"? Interesting thoughts and lovely images here. However, I wonder if this is more of a blog post, or a prose poem (your lines are very long)? You described it as a thesis, even! Kelsey
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SophieHannah24

15 years 12 months ago

Kelsey

True, though I cannot agree that light's existance is dependent upon the presence of darkness, though I can concurr that distinguishing the two would indeed be a difficult matter if the other did not exist. Light cannot be recognized until it is utilized, nor can darkness be acknowleged until it is experienced. Now that I think of what I have just written, I realized it is all for naught. You are indeed correct, though I feel I must argue on some point.....I will write you when I find fault with your comment (which will probably be never lmao). And no, this is not particulary a poem, but exactly what I have titled it: a one AM pondering. LOL and I guess we can be title sisters! :)
sunscreen

sunscreen

15 years 12 months ago

You’re a very deep

You're a very deep individual, ever stop to think: you think too much? Haha joke. Anyways I like this a lot I do wonder such things, but for me usually the balance is always there. life is subject to balancing things out the majority of the time.