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DEATH OF A SHRIMPER

I've been a shrimper all my life
  supported both my kids and wife
  out on the seas where I belong
  how could things have gone so wrong ?

My father shrimped as did his dad
  it earned them everything they had
  we worked our boats and had the feel
  for putting shrimp beneath our keel

I started out 'most every day
  out at the mouth of Mobile bay
  I'd then turn either east or west
  depending which way I deemed best

As evening came I'd head to dock
  my day not governed by a clock
  could usually sell at end of day
  enough to keep the wolf at bay

But now the life that I once led
  is gone 'cause most the shrimp are dead
  survivors are not fit to eat
  no reason to untie the cleat

Though now they say the clean-ups done
  through all their money they have run
  the gusher capped and all is well
  I'm still stuck in shrimpers' hell

You see, now days I sleep in late
  each week at mailbox I await
  the dole that was set up for me
  no longer do I go to sea

I walk the docks and do odd jobs
  still seeing tarry,  oily blobs
  my work, my very life have fled
  'though I still walk, I'm really dead
— scribbler, Jun 08, 2010

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About the Author

Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Frost, Burns, Longfellow, Poe, and Johnson. I guess you've noticed these are all past masters. Other than folks on site I don't read any contemporary poets .

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xena465

xena465

16 years ago

Geeze Stan

This is a great poem for yesterday and today, with the oil-slick and all. Great write Stan. Just one wee thing that may be wrong in this line… enough to keep the wolf at {bey} ………………..[bay] Xena
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magics02

16 years ago

Scribe

All I could say was this brought a tear to my heart as I feel this poem of yours and got to say I appreciated this write of yours and also share your pain, I too feel that way... Good one here really...a tear to my heart. Love,Mona xoxoxo
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scribbler

16 years ago

shrimper

Hate to think how real shrimpers must feel right now.Thanks for dropping in.....scribbler
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shirley harrison

16 years ago

Truly Talented Poet!

well you have touched my heart stan the man, as feel really in awe of this poem you have taken me on a journey of survival! Beautifully written outstanding and although you write this for so many in the same boat "so to speak" you have done it with style! and may i just say, just as well you are a first class poet! shirley harrison
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scribbler

16 years ago

shrimper

Wrote after considering how disaster was going to affect gulf fishermen's sense of self worth.After writing"Gulf Coast 2012" was afraid I might be beating subject to death.Thank you for your kind words.........scribbler
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pleiades

15 years 12 months ago

a relevant write for current

a relevant write for current events just a couple of things that struck me... line 3...no apostrophe needed in seas s 4, l 4, bey-bay last stanza, second line, i think could do with another syllable for smoother flow...just seems it ends short as is ......... terrific rhyme and meter throughtout this write... so consistent. the tale you tell unfolds easily it's emotive, and really engages the reader i like the title too straight forward, and very fitting. there are more ways to die than to stop breathing great write cheer p
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scribbler

15 years 12 months ago

shrimper

thanks for visit and kind words.will edit sea's to seas.Thought I'd fixed bey.Believe I can fix last stanza by adding "y" to oil.regards......scribbler