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Jun 08, 2010
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DEATH OF A SHRIMPER
I've been a shrimper all my life
supported both my kids and wife
out on the seas where I belong
how could things have gone so wrong ?
My father shrimped as did his dad
it earned them everything they had
we worked our boats and had the feel
for putting shrimp beneath our keel
I started out 'most every day
out at the mouth of Mobile bay
I'd then turn either east or west
depending which way I deemed best
As evening came I'd head to dock
my day not governed by a clock
could usually sell at end of day
enough to keep the wolf at bay
But now the life that I once led
is gone 'cause most the shrimp are dead
survivors are not fit to eat
no reason to untie the cleat
Though now they say the clean-ups done
through all their money they have run
the gusher capped and all is well
I'm still stuck in shrimpers' hell
You see, now days I sleep in late
each week at mailbox I await
the dole that was set up for me
no longer do I go to sea
I walk the docks and do odd jobs
still seeing tarry, oily blobs
my work, my very life have fled
'though I still walk, I'm really dead
supported both my kids and wife
out on the seas where I belong
how could things have gone so wrong ?
My father shrimped as did his dad
it earned them everything they had
we worked our boats and had the feel
for putting shrimp beneath our keel
I started out 'most every day
out at the mouth of Mobile bay
I'd then turn either east or west
depending which way I deemed best
As evening came I'd head to dock
my day not governed by a clock
could usually sell at end of day
enough to keep the wolf at bay
But now the life that I once led
is gone 'cause most the shrimp are dead
survivors are not fit to eat
no reason to untie the cleat
Though now they say the clean-ups done
through all their money they have run
the gusher capped and all is well
I'm still stuck in shrimpers' hell
You see, now days I sleep in late
each week at mailbox I await
the dole that was set up for me
no longer do I go to sea
I walk the docks and do odd jobs
still seeing tarry, oily blobs
my work, my very life have fled
'though I still walk, I'm really dead
— scribbler, Jun 08, 2010
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Critiques
xena465
16 years ago
Geeze Stan
magics02
16 years ago
Scribe
scribbler
16 years ago
shrimper
magics02
16 years ago
You are not a shrimper scrimber??
shirley harrison
16 years ago
Truly Talented Poet!
scribbler
16 years ago
shrimper
pleiades
15 years 12 months ago
a relevant write for current
scribbler
15 years 12 months ago
shrimper