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Jesus “Who Was He?”
Let’s think of him
from a non-believer’s point of view
Some say “He was an alien”
Let’s think about that for a moment?
Imagine a visitor from Outer-Space
landing here 2000 odd years ago
seeing what it; he saw…
primitive, ignorance, mindless wanderings
Death, war, to name but a few
Of man’s willingness to change
To be driven by supremacy, the powerful,
the leaders; thus followers ensue.
Then comes along this man,
as little is known of him as a child
a baby, yes; baby Jesus,
but what is known of him
as a teenager?
Remember, this if just a thought
not a ridicule of religion or a sin?
Imagine going back in time
with a child-doll that speaks
“Mama, Mama” a voice-box within
Or a lighter with fuel that spurts fire
wouldn’t that be deemed a miracle?
Maybe that’s why
they stopped visitin`?
I respect all religions that are for the greater good and this is just a poem of thought.
Critiques
judyanne
16 years ago
love the last two lines rosina
xena465
16 years ago
Thanks Judy
Nordic cloud
16 years ago
You are very creative Rosina
xena465
16 years ago
Gee Ann...
Kailashana
16 years ago
Imagine….the bible written
xena465
16 years ago
I Know Kail???
shirley harrison
16 years ago
A great poem
xena465
16 years ago
It's scary sometimes...
scribbler
16 years ago
Jesus
xena465
16 years ago
Thanks Stan
Bob Jr
16 years ago
What a perspective!
xena465
16 years ago
Geeze Bob
rogerramjet365
16 years ago
A really good read, Makes
xena465
16 years ago
Ta much Roger
rogerramjet365
15 years 12 months ago
Ha Ha
mand
16 years ago
The bible tells us that when
xena465
16 years ago
You got it Mand
Seren
16 years ago
Dear Xena
xena465
16 years ago
Thanks JayCee
Roscoe Lane
16 years ago
I am,
xena465
16 years ago
Ramble right on Roscoe...
ziggy
16 years ago
hi
xena465
16 years ago
He, he... thanks Zigs
sunscreen
15 years 12 months ago
Ahhhh QUESTIONS! I love
xena465
15 years 12 months ago
Nice to see you son
sunscreen
15 years 12 months ago
Agreed!
lou
15 years 12 months ago
hi
xena465
15 years 12 months ago
Thanks Lou
Wilton Joseph
15 years 11 months ago
Jesus, who was he?
xena465
15 years 11 months ago
You're so right Wilton
Mari Shine
15 years 11 months ago
What a buffet of food you
xena465
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks Mari