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Jesus “Who Was He?”
Let’s think of him
from a non-believer’s point of view
Some say “He was an alien”
Let’s think about that for a moment?
Imagine a visitor from Outer-Space
landing here 2000 odd years ago
seeing what it; he saw…
primitive, ignorance, mindless wanderings
Death, war, to name but a few
Of man’s willingness to change
To be driven by supremacy, the powerful,
the leaders; thus followers ensue.
Then comes along this man,
as little is known of him as a child
a baby, yes; baby Jesus,
but what is known of him
as a teenager?
Remember, this if just a thought
not a ridicule of religion or a sin?
Imagine going back in time
with a child-doll that speaks
“Mama, Mama” a voice-box within
Or a lighter with fuel that spurts fire
wouldn’t that be deemed a miracle?
Maybe that’s why
they stopped visitin`?
I respect all religions that are for the greater good and this is just a poem of thought.
Critiques
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
love the last two lines rosina
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Thanks Judy
Nordic cloud
16 years 1 month ago
You are very creative Rosina
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Gee Ann...
Kailashana
16 years 1 month ago
Imagine….the bible written
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
I Know Kail???
shirley harrison
16 years 1 month ago
A great poem
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
It's scary sometimes...
scribbler
16 years 1 month ago
Jesus
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Thanks Stan
Bob Jr
16 years 1 month ago
What a perspective!
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Geeze Bob
rogerramjet365
16 years 1 month ago
A really good read, Makes
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Ta much Roger
rogerramjet365
16 years 1 month ago
Ha Ha
mand
16 years 1 month ago
The bible tells us that when
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
You got it Mand
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Xena
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Thanks JayCee
Roscoe Lane
16 years 1 month ago
I am,
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Ramble right on Roscoe...
ziggy
16 years 1 month ago
hi
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
He, he... thanks Zigs
sunscreen
16 years 1 month ago
Ahhhh QUESTIONS! I love
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Nice to see you son
sunscreen
16 years 1 month ago
Agreed!
lou
16 years 1 month ago
hi
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Thanks Lou
Wilton Joseph
16 years 1 month ago
Jesus, who was he?
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
You're so right Wilton
Mari Shine
16 years ago
What a buffet of food you
xena465
16 years ago
Thanks Mari
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