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Death of a Witchdoctor

His grey, wirey beard skims a parquet floor,
As doting believers crowd at his door,
He hoards each new coin,
In a loving embrace,
This freelance salesperson,
Is devoid of disgrace..

He feigns Divine wisdom,
As he guides each new step,
Which partner to wed,
Which business deal sealed,
He elevates hands,
To ensure all are healed..

But even he with his cunning,
Could not deceive Death,
As it came to condemn him,
He fell like the rest,
And as tributes abound at a dizzying pace,
He exits the Universe,
A silenced, blank face...








— sharon-rose, Jun 08, 2010

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judyanne

judyanne

16 years ago

a truth you have written here sharon

'He exits the Universe, A silenced, blank face…' - as we all do great write love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
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sharon-rose

16 years ago

Thanks Judy

Thanks for your comment. I took a look at the link to your writing and I'm keen to know more.
judyanne

judyanne

16 years ago

are you asking me?

thanks very much for looking at the link. the blurb tells it i hope happy to fill you in if you let me know your questions. love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
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sharon-rose

16 years ago

thanks judy

of course I am very interested in knowing more about what you have experienced and your writing.
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sharon-rose

15 years 12 months ago

Thanks Hara kiri

At the end of the day this guru was no different to all flesh and blood..I'm glad that came across in the poem.Thanks for your comment.