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Jun 08, 2010
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Death of a Witchdoctor
His grey, wirey beard skims a parquet floor,
As doting believers crowd at his door,
He hoards each new coin,
In a loving embrace,
This freelance salesperson,
Is devoid of disgrace..
He feigns Divine wisdom,
As he guides each new step,
Which partner to wed,
Which business deal sealed,
He elevates hands,
To ensure all are healed..
But even he with his cunning,
Could not deceive Death,
As it came to condemn him,
He fell like the rest,
And as tributes abound at a dizzying pace,
He exits the Universe,
A silenced, blank face...
As doting believers crowd at his door,
He hoards each new coin,
In a loving embrace,
This freelance salesperson,
Is devoid of disgrace..
He feigns Divine wisdom,
As he guides each new step,
Which partner to wed,
Which business deal sealed,
He elevates hands,
To ensure all are healed..
But even he with his cunning,
Could not deceive Death,
As it came to condemn him,
He fell like the rest,
And as tributes abound at a dizzying pace,
He exits the Universe,
A silenced, blank face...
— sharon-rose, Jun 08, 2010
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judyanne
16 years ago
a truth you have written here sharon
sharon-rose
16 years ago
Thanks Judy
judyanne
16 years ago
are you asking me?
sharon-rose
16 years ago
thanks judy
sharon-rose
15 years 12 months ago
Thanks Hara kiri