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Lillian-Storm

3430grams of pure sweetness
floated down from heaven today
this joy makes all the pain?
worth every minute

in that beauty's first breath

— Seren, Jun 08, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Beyond the Black Stump..Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda, P.K.Page, W.H.Auden, to many and various to include them all ...

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years ago

How wonderful! Welcome to

How wonderful! Welcome to the dreamworld Lillian! ~ "Even if I knew the world were to end tomorrow, I would plant an olive tree today."-- Francis of Assisi
Seren

Seren

16 years ago

thanks Ma … shes fucking

thanks Ma ... shes fucking gorgeous ... one of the most beautiful babies i have ever seen with a head full of blonde hair to die for ... Lyz was overcome shes tired and that woman was floating not walking lol never seen anyone so wrapped in my life ... love you Ma JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
Seren

Seren

16 years ago

I have a blog if you would

I have a blog if you would like to leave Lyz a message she asked me to let everyone know for her JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
xena465

xena465

16 years ago

Love the title

So few words that express joy...beautiful JayCee. Xena
Seren

Seren

16 years ago

Dear Rosina

Lyz's Daughter had her baby this evening at 6pm ... I am tired but very happy mother and child are fine Lillian-Storm is her name and this is the first gift from her aunty Jayne lol tomorrow I go shopping lol love and hugs JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
SH

shirley harrison

16 years ago

"STUNNING" !

My goodness seren, you really know how to get the hearts of others pumping! and all for a new baby! it was raining sweetness on you today!Congratulations shirley harrison
Seren

Seren

16 years ago

Dear Shirley

thanks for the beautiful comment ... I am one tired and happy great aunty lol love and big hugs JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
Seren

Seren

16 years ago

yes darlin she takes after

yes darlin she takes after your family there is no denying that lol love and hugs Wifey x x x x x x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
B

Bosscombat

16 years ago

:)

“Neither fire nor wind, birth nor death can erase our good deeds”. Buddha A bub that looks like BJ... Buddha save us all. xoxo ♣
Seren

Seren

16 years ago

She is a good deed indeed

She is a good deed indeed ... thanks for the read and the comment and thanks for having me at your house while we down for bubbies birth ... love and biggest hugs JayKneeee 2 bums ;) pmsl or should that become no bum now lol ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
Seren

Seren

16 years ago

Dear Lou

Thanks Love JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years ago

Dear Jayne

Euphoria! Congratulations to Lyz and her family. Welcome Lillian Storm! Love, Cat
Seren

Seren

16 years ago

Dearest Cat

Both sides are euphoric lol but its a lovely thing to see .... will send pictures tonight have to resize them before I send or they will be massive off our camera lol love and hugs JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years ago

So beautiful, the calm after the storm.

Ann of Norway The opening of the flower of a new life, the bursting onto the scene of a brilliant sunlight, the joy of all things within the family of loved ones. Yes welcome to this wonderful world Lillian Storm. May you be happy and know that you are surrounded by adoring people always. My love to you, you made it through the trials of early growth and now give such extreme joy to all who watched you come into this happening called existence. Ann.
Seren

Seren

16 years ago

Dearest Ann I have to say

Dearest Ann I have to say lol extreme is the word for it It was crazy just about to go have lunch and after I am sending out emails before I go back to the hospital ... cant wait to see her but I am staying away till tonight to give others a chance to catch up with Jade and bubby and Lyz and the Bj ... its been a wild couple of days talk to you soon love and big hugs JayCee x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
Seren

Seren

16 years ago

Dear Stanthank you so very

Dear Stan thank you so very much love and hugs JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
Seren

Seren

16 years ago

Dear Ell's

it was a painful but joyful day, a funny day but ive had a sleep and I am feeling heaps more smiley today, last night I was halfway to mental it was a rough day to get to the celebrating bit lol love and big hugs JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
M

magics02

16 years ago

Congratulations Great Aunt!!

and to the entire family Lillian Storm On the day you were born God's greatest gift Began with a kiss!! Blessings out to the little one and the family. I know soon you will sport a picture of the lovely one soon. Please tell Lyz Congrats!! Love,Mona xoxox
Seren

Seren

16 years ago

Mona can do even better than

Mona can do even better than that I will tell her and give her hugs and kisses from everyone lol european style lol thanks for the lovely verse ... I am saving them all for the baby book :) all the poetry thats written for her will be printed out and given to her mum what a great way to celebrate a birth lol love and big hugs JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")