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A sweet face, hard to describe

All my poetry is love poetry;
Even the dirty, bloody lines
Are written by a hand that's known tenderness;
And a living mind, still swimming
In the roseblood of its deepest wounds;

Love, the great wave, setting the body to die before desire,
Drowning fear like a screaming weakness;
Love, the lotus blade, sharpened on wit;
So clean, it cuts through disgrace;
Shearing the universe, befriending death;

And as it turned my world, love turned me to hers;
Words like "wife" and "mother" burning, like shrapnel, in my chest;
Too dangerous to look at; too beautiful to ignore;
Our bodies like stars, fully formed,
And immune to refusal;
— Chris B, Jun 08, 2010

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club special

16 years ago

very nice

I like the line 'In the roseblood of it's deepest wounds,' pure and honest poetry my friend...Club Special== five goddamn stars
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raskin

16 years ago

I must agree, some very good

I must agree, some very good lines here. "words like wife and mother burning, like shrapnel, in my chest" A lot of emotion in this. raskin
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years ago

Sharp and edgy! My favorite

Sharp and edgy! My favorite lines: Love, the great wave, setting the body to die before desire, Drowning fear like a screaming weakness; Love, the lotus blade, sharpened on wit; So clean, it cuts through disgrace; Shearing the universe, befriending death; Always, Cat
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Chris B

16 years ago

Thanks

I appreciate the kudos, everyone.
Seren

Seren

15 years 12 months ago

Chris ~!~!

You got my attention ... no more will you slip past unnoticed ... I could swear this poems that good but I dont want to scare you lol love JayCee smile ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
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amalzamani

15 years 11 months ago

I expected to see her face

You have excellent lines in this one, but I can't see her face :) the only line that gives me a hint is "Too dangerous to look at; too beautiful to ignore" Enjoyable one...thanks