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Jun 08, 2010
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A sweet face, hard to describe
All my poetry is love poetry;
Even the dirty, bloody lines
Are written by a hand that's known tenderness;
And a living mind, still swimming
In the roseblood of its deepest wounds;
Love, the great wave, setting the body to die before desire,
Drowning fear like a screaming weakness;
Love, the lotus blade, sharpened on wit;
So clean, it cuts through disgrace;
Shearing the universe, befriending death;
And as it turned my world, love turned me to hers;
Words like "wife" and "mother" burning, like shrapnel, in my chest;
Too dangerous to look at; too beautiful to ignore;
Our bodies like stars, fully formed,
And immune to refusal;
Even the dirty, bloody lines
Are written by a hand that's known tenderness;
And a living mind, still swimming
In the roseblood of its deepest wounds;
Love, the great wave, setting the body to die before desire,
Drowning fear like a screaming weakness;
Love, the lotus blade, sharpened on wit;
So clean, it cuts through disgrace;
Shearing the universe, befriending death;
And as it turned my world, love turned me to hers;
Words like "wife" and "mother" burning, like shrapnel, in my chest;
Too dangerous to look at; too beautiful to ignore;
Our bodies like stars, fully formed,
And immune to refusal;
— Chris B, Jun 08, 2010
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Critiques
club special
16 years ago
very nice
raskin
16 years ago
I must agree, some very good
Roscoe Lane
16 years ago
I to agree,
Candlewitch
16 years ago
Sharp and edgy! My favorite
Chris B
16 years ago
Thanks
Seren
15 years 12 months ago
Chris ~!~!
amalzamani
15 years 11 months ago
I expected to see her face