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Jun 07, 2010
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UNCIVIL WAR
Lets now not talk of right or wrong
who was weak and who was strong
forget the leaders and their goals
but just the ones who fought, poor souls
Some wore grey and some wore blue
and often they each other knew
the war that started off as "grand"
too rapidly grew out of hand
The sides, it seemed , soon grew unable
to put war's horses back in stable
on both sides there were soldiers bold
most of whom never grew old
They fought in cover and formation
each thought for God and their own nation
although afraid, they seldom fled
both colors bleeding blood of red
The blue had numbers, grey had leaders
the South had muskets, the North repeaters
how could the grey have fought so long
against a foe that was so strong ?
Had it remained a border war
it may have ended long before
hostilities became so strong
none could admit to being wrong
The grey fought even stronger yet
when armies in their homeland met
they saw blue cousins as invaders
themselves as home's frontline crusaders
In farmers' fields and woods they fell
each side creating its own hell
of rifle fire and cannon shot
the reason for the fight forgot
At the end of each great battle
the wagons' and the hearses' rattle
told of a death toll ever growing
as result of whirlwind sowing
When seemed the war would never end
at Gettysburg, a change of wind
in Pickett's charge the grey clad fell
as if from scythe in open dell
This turning point where Lee was beat
began the long bitter retreat
then Sherman's rampage to the sea
showed grey how ugly war could be
It seems the best of either side
for their ideals fought and died
each sacrifice was someone's brother
and left behind a grieving mother
Each soul who chose to give his all
in blue's triumph or in grey's fall
when laid to rest beneath the sod
were each beloved by kin and God
who was weak and who was strong
forget the leaders and their goals
but just the ones who fought, poor souls
Some wore grey and some wore blue
and often they each other knew
the war that started off as "grand"
too rapidly grew out of hand
The sides, it seemed , soon grew unable
to put war's horses back in stable
on both sides there were soldiers bold
most of whom never grew old
They fought in cover and formation
each thought for God and their own nation
although afraid, they seldom fled
both colors bleeding blood of red
The blue had numbers, grey had leaders
the South had muskets, the North repeaters
how could the grey have fought so long
against a foe that was so strong ?
Had it remained a border war
it may have ended long before
hostilities became so strong
none could admit to being wrong
The grey fought even stronger yet
when armies in their homeland met
they saw blue cousins as invaders
themselves as home's frontline crusaders
In farmers' fields and woods they fell
each side creating its own hell
of rifle fire and cannon shot
the reason for the fight forgot
At the end of each great battle
the wagons' and the hearses' rattle
told of a death toll ever growing
as result of whirlwind sowing
When seemed the war would never end
at Gettysburg, a change of wind
in Pickett's charge the grey clad fell
as if from scythe in open dell
This turning point where Lee was beat
began the long bitter retreat
then Sherman's rampage to the sea
showed grey how ugly war could be
It seems the best of either side
for their ideals fought and died
each sacrifice was someone's brother
and left behind a grieving mother
Each soul who chose to give his all
in blue's triumph or in grey's fall
when laid to rest beneath the sod
were each beloved by kin and God
— scribbler, Jun 07, 2010
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Critiques
shirley harrison
16 years ago
Excellent!
scribbler
16 years ago
war
magics02
16 years ago
Wow Scribe
scribbler
16 years ago
war
Roscoe Lane
16 years ago
Tremendous poem,
scribbler
16 years ago
war
scribbler
16 years ago
war
docmaverick
16 years ago
scribbler, the indi is right....
scribbler
16 years ago
war
judyanne
16 years ago
brother against brother
scribbler
16 years ago
war
xena465
16 years ago
Wonderful Stan
scribbler
16 years ago
war
ngaioBeck
16 years ago
Uncivil
scribbler
16 years ago
war
ngaioBeck
16 years ago
Uncivil
scribbler
16 years ago
war
ngaioBeck
15 years 12 months ago
Ex-Military
mand
16 years ago
Excellent flow. You gave me
scribbler
16 years ago
war