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However, your haiku left me wondering, can a dog piss and growl at the same time, naturally, fundamentally and elementarily? ;-) ~ "Even if I knew the world were to end tomorrow, I would plant an olive tree today."-- Francis of Assisi

The title is excellent and then enters the poem, if this is for a contest i wish you good luck with all my heart Judy shirley harrison

love it! the sass, the attitude... so much said in so few words on behalf of all beleaguered elements, i thank you cheers p pssst...great title for this piece

good things come in small packages, your poem, combined with the title, does an excellent job of describing the nature of a storm. Yep, I really like this one. Love Mand xxxx

It sure feeling like that sometimes. Xena

I can and do read, but not comment on competition poetry. :) Love, Cat

Ann of Norway There's one about the dogs pissing at the Buddha, was it Issa, probably so. He was always a 'particular' Haïku poet. Its pissing on us now warm Summer rain and three girls of about 15 have bee running about in the grounds of the flats laughing and dancing, wading through the sudden pond that was created by the water, in the centre of the football area, throwing stones into it, and getting thoroughly soaked in their Summer garbs, no rainwear. Joy at the Summer rain, but others might well look on it as the old English saying goes "Its raining cats and dogs" or as my Aunt(not) here in Norway said " The cats and dogs are falling down."!!!!! Love to you judyanne from annanya

hello Judyanne short but too the point I too have written a poem called storm maybe you can take a peek I write on the elements of which i feel we are one many times. always Electric Blue