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Connect The Dots
I know every little hair
On the small of your back
I love to take my finger tip
And play connect the dots with your freckles
While you tell me something
That neither one of us is paying attention to
I love to get my little hot wheel
And run it up and over the curves
Of your perfect ass
Pretending I am flying over sand dunes
I love to put my hands
On your tiny little waist
And gently roll you over
Until I see my two best friends
Laying there sunny side up
Now I don’t know if it is pure luck
Or if God intended it this way
But your belly button is the perfect size
To hold a M&M
Everything about you melts in my mouth
And all over my hands
I love the way you whisper my name
While your eyes sing to my soul
Every inch of you is pure heat
But the sexiest thing about you is
The way you make me feel like a man
Critiques
hobo
16 years ago
Be back soon
docmaverick
16 years ago
You take care, hobo....
Kailashana
16 years ago
Some poem you leave us with.
judyanne
16 years ago
smiling
hobo
16 years ago
hot wheel
shirley harrison
16 years ago
you make me feel so whole!
scribbler
16 years ago
connect
magics02
16 years ago
Randy
lou
16 years ago
Wow
panaella
16 years ago
ooooo melting m&m's
xena465
16 years ago
You're such a romantic Hobo
Candlewitch
15 years 12 months ago
Dear Randy