Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.

Connect The Dots

I know every little hair

On the small of your back

I love to take my finger tip

And play connect the dots with your freckles

While you tell me something

That neither one of us is paying attention to

I love to get my little hot wheel

And run it up and over the curves

Of your perfect ass

Pretending I am flying over sand dunes

I love to put my hands

On your tiny little waist

And gently roll you over

Until I see my two best friends

Laying there sunny side up

Now I don’t know if it is pure luck

Or if God intended it this way

But your belly button is the perfect size

To hold a M&M

Everything about you melts in my mouth

And all over my hands

I love the way you whisper my name

While your eyes sing to my soul

Every inch of you is pure heat

But the sexiest thing about you is

The way you make me feel like a man

— hobo, Jun 07, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Country/Region: USA

More from this author

Critiques

hobo

hobo

16 years ago

Be back soon

Well my friends it is sad to say but I am headed back to work which means this time I will be gone for 8 days. I won’t be back until the Tuesday after next so please don’t forget me. I promise I won’t forget you hobo
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years ago

You take care, hobo....

...when you return, you can go through your "fan mail", concerning this final effort. Quite the scintillating piece. I thought that maybe it was a "tad" rushed.....but, now I see. You were leaving for work. You ARE, "the man". Thanks, for the read. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years ago

Some poem you leave us with.

Some poem you leave us with. ;-) Some poet you are. Thank you for giving me something to smile about this morning, Hobo. Best to you and she. ~ "Even if I knew the world were to end tomorrow, I would plant an olive tree today."-- Francis of Assisi
judyanne

judyanne

16 years ago

smiling

please enlighten me if it's not too embarrassing what is your 'little hot wheel'? laughing with this one randy - you sure live up to your name love judy xx ps - hurry back we'll miss you http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
hobo

hobo

16 years ago

hot wheel

hot wheel is one of those little bitty cars that kids play with. lol if they are jumping over the dunes they are really quite fun hahaha. I recommend every girl get there boyfriend one for christmas lol. you will both have a lot of fun I promise :)
SH

shirley harrison

16 years ago

you make me feel so whole!

ok so i got to the middle of this poem and oh L:O:L as the delights are all there to see Brilliant work you have been producing! shirley harrison
S

scribbler

16 years ago

connect

Song of Solomon , eat your heart out.Well worth pushing nom. button......scribbler
M

magics02

16 years ago

Randy

Watch out your poetry is heating up as the summer approaches and you do it in a subtle way making it squeaking clean!! Love this one and did the M and M melt by the way?? LOL talk to you when you return unless sooner, will miss ya around here, you make us laugh and think about your words, well for me they do I should say Love and Hugs at ya Mona xxoxoxo
lou

lou

16 years ago

Wow

Heaven on earth lou xx
P

panaella

16 years ago

ooooo melting m&m's

This is quite erotic and sweet at the same time...loved it! I'm going to add you to my bud list so I can track your stuff...really entertaining! Ells x
xena465

xena465

16 years ago

You're such a romantic Hobo

How will we ladies survive without you for eight whole days…great witty write as always...a masterpiece from the master. Mmmm…me too loves my M&M’s Xena
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

15 years 12 months ago

Dear Randy

Are you trying to make me cry? LOL! This is very hot, but with pure loving! Hurry back to us, as you will be missed. Always, Cat