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Jun 06, 2010
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Dance of Emotions
Sorrow only hangs her headWhile walking to the floorPride wants all the attentionWhile Greed keeps seeking more Shame hides behind the curtainsWhile Anger demands his wayFear is too afraid to danceImpatience just wouldn't stay Joy was dancing all over the placeWhile Lust's heart began to burnLove just watched with stars in her eyesWhile Patience was waiting his turn Confusion didn't know what to doWhile Surprise was doing the twistShock was so appalled of it allWhile Temptation just couldn't resist The Broken Hearts just sit and criedWhile Doubt didn't believe it was realNow you've seen the dance of emotionsSo tell me, how do you feel?
— Whiskurz, Jun 06, 2010
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Grassfield
16 years ago
I liked it! Especially the