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mantiscepter
Jun 06, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

The Touch

 With a love
that was my everything
the breaths
of these words I say

stands a burning light
in dreams held tight
emotions each
swirling bright

this touch of hearts
of future life
that tell my story
in this passing life
— mantiscepter, Jun 06, 2010

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lyz

16 years ago

Dear John

Warm, and felt. This touch of hearts, of future life that tell my story in this passing life. You have touched mine. XX
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mantiscepter

16 years ago

The touch

Hi Lyz. It's been awhile , How are things? hope all is going good. I'm happy you were touched ,and this was a good one for me. It brought you out to comment.. great to hear from you. Love John,XXX
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lyz

16 years ago

All fine hun

Just a quickie. Jade is being induced in the morning and has just not long ago gone to hospital, which is up the hill from my house. Yay. for that. Lol. I will be in touch either tomorrow or day after. I hope you and yours are well and I am telling ya, no bike pics, none come up, lol. Never mind I will be back soon, you take care of all and I did feel your words in this poem. i miss reading. But hey, I will return. I get to meet Jayne face to face tomorrow, as she is Lillian-Storm's Aunty so she will be here too see the little one newly born. I am excited, cant tell though. Love you all lots. Thanks John. Love us. XX