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I wasn't going to vote on comp entries in case I get back into AEC lol but I wasnt thinking the other night and voted on someones comp entry lol so everyones getting a vote this month ... good luck in the comp love and big hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")

You're becoming a master of poetry forms. You must be working really hard to achieve such a brilliant write. PS Good luck in comp too x Xena

Ann of Norway This new way to describe a thunder storm, not in the least bit banal quite the opposite stunningly original and enticingly provocative of the imagination, I love the way you created this "painting" I didn't know you could paint so well. As to sonnet I still am not au fait with its form, I like to be not only in free form, but free lance if you know what I mean. Love to you and good luck if its for some competition, I am sure you will come high up if not at the top. Love to you annanya.

i have alot of catching up to do Judy! you are and have been an insperation to me and i'm so glad i'm back! shirley harrison

Judyanne Welcome to the Neopoet family Thank you for looking in on my poem Ocean's Farewell dedicated to my late husband. He loved the sea, he was an artist and photographer. I too am drawn to the water I love nature and walking in the rain is one of my favourite things to do. I love the elements in all forms. I write about them mostly. I read your poem several times and was struck by the many desciiptions. The colours WoW what a wonderful Painting you have created - being an artist my poetry is very visual and so many visions did I see. You visions created will stay with me and maybe I can create the vision I see. I stream with poetry but I have discovered many types which I am trying to learn about they seem alien to me but I love a challenge. Electric blue

never tried one lol but I certainly love this and will look deeper into it :) Smoothly? hmm I think I was a bit ufamiliar with some words but that is me lol thanks, Mark Resilient Flexibility RUN; when there seems to be no answer common sense will not speak, so run - -go running..

'''This new way to describe a thunder storm, not in the least bit banal quite the opposite stunningly original and enticingly provocative of the imagination, I love the way you created this “painting” I didn’t know you could paint so well.''' Ma'am Ann's COMMENTS SUM IT ALL WHO AM I NOW WORTHY ENOUGH now TO COMMENT NOT FOR THE WORTH OF the SALT THAT's MY BODY 'S sole content please do read in smaller case with a magnifying glass thanks

I don't , or try not to, comment on competition poetry, as I might be one of the judges for the poetry contest. That is if I get the votes, lol. If I were you, I would pm Jayne to make sure your questions get answered, as some comments can slip through the cracks. Love, Cat

...didn't "fancy" this one. I realize it was supposed to be about a storm, but, peltering the reader with choppy descriptions doesn't do it for me. I apologize, if I missed it...but, I really wanted to know how the storm made you feel.....what other day did it remind you of, etc.? So much, for throwing all your discards into one lump. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.