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Night Flight

                        Night Flight



                Octember winds seduce my dreams
                and whisk me off to play
                in places where my soul has never flown
                there to bathe my feet in streams
                that wash my pain away
                and meet with creatures I have never known

                To waltz with Elven maidens fair
                within a moonlit glen
                while Fairie-voices sing among the trees
                and lose myself in wonder there
                that's rarely ever been
                within the realm of probabilities

                Emerald Unicorns run free
                and romp with Wallaroos
                across a vale of undulating grass
                Nymphs and Dryads call to me
                with voices that amuse
                and fill my heart with joy that cannot pass

                Centaurs lope and Satyrs dance
                playing flutes of wood
                and chanting words that tell of other times
                when the world was full of chance
                and every creature could
                believe they sculpted magic with their rhymes

                and as I close my eyes once more
                giving in to sleep
                I realize no mundane, morning sun
                will ever open any door
                more real than what I keep
                locked deep within, and now my tale is done


                C.  Lon  R.  Bruso
               
               

              

               
               
               
               
               
               
— Lonnie, Jun 05, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: New England, originally, now, Macon, N.C., USA

Favorite Poets: Poe, Frost, Bob Dylan

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poewriter58

16 years ago

Lon

Wording was spot on. I had a bit of a problem with the cadence of the poem but then as you well know I have a lot on my mind so it may have been just me. I want to have dreams like this love Me
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Lonnie

16 years ago

Thank you, Love!

I'll read it to you sometime so you can hear the cadence! LOL!!! Don't worry, dear daughter will be here soon!
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years ago

LOL, did you know Wallaroos are real, not mythical beasts?

this one sounds familiar, are you doing a series of "faerie" poems? Beautifully written, interesting structure. Cheers, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible, "the alleged short-cut to knowledge, which is faith, is only a short-circuit destroying the mind." [Ayn Rand, Atlas Shrugged]
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Lonnie

16 years ago

Thank you, Jess

No, not a series on Fairie, just like to get whimsical now and again! and yes, I did know that Wallaroos are real, just wanted to mix my beasties, so to speak!
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scribbler

16 years ago

octember

Worth 5 stars for coining of "Octember" alone.Also enjoyed the complex rhyme scheme.Write on.....scribbler
Seren

Seren

16 years ago

Dear Lonnie

I loved the Octember as well :) love the whole poem in fact ... lovely work ...you never disappoint love and hugs to you both JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
judyanne

judyanne

16 years ago

love this lonnie

'Octember winds seduce my dreams and whisk me off to play in places where my soul has never flown' and then you introduce our souls to the world of your dreams thank you love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
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Lonnie

16 years ago

Many thanks, Judy!

It's always nice to chase the Fantasy Fairy around the Maypole now and again!
lou

lou

16 years ago

Fantastical

A great ride through a fantasy land. my only crit is the word octember, its obviously just me, but i feel it would sound better with a real word. Love Lou xx
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Lonnie

16 years ago

Thank you, Lou!

I just figured if I was writing a Fantasy poem that I might as well use a Fantasy Month for the journey!
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lyz

16 years ago

I hope your tale is not done.

I thoroughly enjoyed what you have written from deep inside. Very creative. Bravo. Wanting more, lol. XX
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Lonnie

16 years ago

Thank you, Lyz!

and more will be forthcoming, I assure you, as soon as I take some more good drugs! LOL!!!
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Lonnie

16 years ago

Thanks for the heads up!

I didn't notice the typo until you pointed it out and I thank you very much! I'm also glad that you enjoyed the poem!
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

15 years 12 months ago

And what a world you create

Ann of Norway And what a world you create:- I have not seen you recently, and I saw one on the spotlight but haven't found it again ...yet! And here you weave so beautifully the world parallel to ours together with your conscious self and tug away our senses to think of other things, of strange illusions where we joyfully dance the moments it took for you to write for us, t is as if you wrote for us, isn't it? And we feel blessed for the moment as we read. Yours as aye Ann.